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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v.1

Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v. 1 NE8y
Writing task 2 27 feb In this modern era internet is become very basic thing for everyone, from high profile person to common men uses internet daily. The reach of internet is highly spread to all over world. Thus, some internet users post any kind of data on the internet without knowing that the details is accurate or not. As a result, wrong information comes first while surfing on internet. Internet in sea of knowledge, but because of many fake data it became hard to get proper useful information over internet. Moreover, The incorrect info spread by reads also as they do not check the fact and believes what they read posts on websites. Not only individual post wrong info, there are serval companies with runs fake ads over many social media to sell their products. By watching or reading insensible ads or articles for very long time and many times a day will affects people’s mind and they will start thinking that the details was accurate. For example, people still believes that fairness creams work as it shown in ads. There are uncountable ways of using internet, to provide good knowledge to every if one of them. If things gets out of control, then its necessary to take action. So, there should be some restriction on posting over the internet which will make only accurate data will upload and other will delete by itself. People need some education on how to identify fake data, so they don’t forward it to anyone. With addition, government should punish those people who post inaccurate information. In the end, people are free to express their selves and can share their knowledge with accurate information. Other side everyone should check the facts after reading or seeing info from anywhere.
Writing

task 2 27
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In this modern era internet
is become
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very
basic thing for everyone, from high profile person to common
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men
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
internet daily. The reach of internet is
highly
spread to all
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over
world.
Thus
,
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some
internet users
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post
any kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
on the internet without knowing that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
is
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accurate
or not.
As a result
,
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wrong
information
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
first
while surfing on internet.

Internet in sea of knowledge,
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but
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because
of
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many
fake
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data
it became
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
proper useful information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
over
internet.
Moreover
, The incorrect info spread by reads
also
as they do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the fact and believes what they read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
posts
on websites. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
individual
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post
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wrong
info, there are
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serval
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
with runs fake ads
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over
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many
social media to sell their products. By watching or reading insensible ads or articles for
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very
long time and
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many
times a day will affects
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people’s
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
mind and
they will
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start
thinking that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
was
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accurate
.
For example
,
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people
still
believes that fairness creams work as it
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shown
in ads.

There are uncountable ways of using internet, to provide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
knowledge to every if one of them. If things
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
out of control, then its necessary to take action.
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So
, there should be
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some
restriction on posting
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over
the internet which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accurate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
will upload and other will delete by itself.
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People
need
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some
education on how to identify fake
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data
,
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so
they don’t forward it to anyone.
Did you mean "in"?
With
addition,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should punish those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
post
inaccurate information.

In the
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end
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are free to express their selves and can share their knowledge with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accurate
information. Other side everyone should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the facts after reading or seeing info from anywhere.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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