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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. mQLr
There have been numerous challenges in moving to another country in all aspects of human life. Most people think that emigration to a country where has had another language from your mother tongue can create some problems for making contact with inhabitants. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that humans can have to face many difficulties in their social life. Some problems will be waiting for people regardless of which level they are in that language proficiency, even if they are in advance or an expert on that language, it will not be the same when they talk in their mother tongue. Besides theoretical, people can have enough information and ability on their second language and improve that skills with good marks on proficiency exams such as IELTS or TOEFL, but in practical, knowledge can be insufficient. For example, a person who took nine-band scores on Ielts has to talk about something on a specific topic with his friends and realizes he owns restricted words to say on it. Furthermore, they can be affected by another problem due to their accent or their mouth shape. For instance, it is difficult to understand some people's pronunciation like Indians it can generate misunderstanding on some words. On the other hand, due to a lack of confidence, some people tend to prefer to be alone instead of saying something wrong. Sometimes people do not create an opportunity to face this problem, even though, they can handle it successfully with some practice. For example, two years ago, I had to move to Athens with a normal level of English, but at the end of that adventure, I had a higher level of English owing to practice. In conclusion, a fresh start in a new country can be the dream of someones, but people have to be aware of the difficulties from the have to speak a foreign language in their social life such as language skills and However, it can not be denied that problems can be solved with time, practice, and self-confidence.
There have been numerous challenges in moving to another country in all aspects of human life. Most
people
think
that emigration to a country where has had another
language
from your mother tongue can create
some
problems
for making contact with inhabitants. In my opinion, I
agree
with the
idea
that humans can
have to
face
many
difficulties in their social life.

Some
problems
will be waiting for
people
regardless of which level they are in that
language
proficiency, even if they are in advance or an expert on that
language
, it will not be the same when they talk in their mother tongue.
Besides
theoretical,
people
can have
enough
information and ability on their second
language
and
improve
that
skills
with
good
marks on proficiency exams such as IELTS or TOEFL,
but
in practical, knowledge can be insufficient.
For example
, a person who took nine-band scores on
Ielts
has to
talk about something on a specific topic with his friends and realizes he
owns
restricted words to say on it.
Furthermore
, they can be
affected
by another
problem
due to their accent or their mouth shape.
For instance
, it is difficult to understand
some
people
's pronunciation like Indians it can generate misunderstanding on
some
words.

On the other hand
, due to a lack of confidence,
some
people
tend to prefer to be alone
instead
of saying something
wrong
.
Sometimes
people
do not create an opportunity to face this
problem
,
even though
, they can handle it
successfully
with
some
practice.
For example
, two years ago, I had to
move
to Athens with a normal level of English,
but
at the
end
of that adventure, I had a higher level of English owing to practice.

In conclusion
, a fresh
start
in a new country can be the dream of someones,
but
people
have to
be aware of the difficulties from the
have to
speak a foreign
language
in their social life such as
language
skills
and

However
, it can not
be denied
that
problems
can
be solved
with time, practice, and self-confidence.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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  American English
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