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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v.1

Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v. 1 LewK
Writing task 2 27 feb In this modern era internet is become very basic thing for everyone, from high profile person to common men uses internet daily. The reach of internet is highly spread to all over world. Thus, some internet users post any kind of data on the internet without knowing that the details is accurate or not. As a result, wrong information comes first while surfing on internet. Internet in sea of knowledge, but because of many fake data it became hard to get proper useful information over internet. Moreover, The incorrect info spread by reads also as they do not check the fact and believes what they read posts on websites. Not only individual post wrong info, there are serval companies with runs fake ads over many social media to sell their products. By watching or reading unsensible ads or articles for very long time and many times a day will affects peoples mind and they will start thinking that the details was accurate. For example, people still believes that fairness creams works as the watch in ads.
Writing

task 2 27
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feb


In this modern era internet
is become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
basic thing for everyone, from high profile person to common
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
internet daily. The reach of internet is
highly
spread to all over world.
Thus
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
internet users post any kind of data on the internet without knowing that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
is accurate or not.
As a result
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
information
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
first
while surfing on internet.

Internet in sea of knowledge,
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but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
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many
fake data it became
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
proper useful information over internet.
Moreover
, The incorrect info spread by reads
also
as they do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the fact and believes what they read posts on websites. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
individual post
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
info, there are
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serval
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
with runs fake ads over
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
social media to sell their products. By watching or reading
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unsensible
ads or articles for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
long time and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
times a day will affects peoples
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
mind and
they will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
thinking that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
was accurate.
For example
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
still
believes that fairness creams works as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
in ads.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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