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Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v.1

Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v. 1 LewK
Writing task 2 27 feb In this modern era internet is become very basic thing for everyone, from high profile person to common men uses internet daily. The reach of internet is highly spread to all over world. Thus, some internet users post any kind of data on the internet without knowing that the details is accurate or not. As a result, wrong information comes first while surfing on internet. Internet in sea of knowledge, but because of many fake data it became hard to get proper useful information over internet. Moreover, The incorrect info spread by reads also as they do not check the fact and believes what they read posts on websites. Not only individual post wrong info, there are serval companies with runs fake ads over many social media to sell their products. By watching or reading unsensible ads or articles for very long time and many times a day will affects peoples mind and they will start thinking that the details was accurate. For example, people still believes that fairness creams works as the watch in ads.
Writing

task 2 27
feb


In this modern era internet
is become
very
basic thing for everyone, from high profile person to common
men
uses
internet daily. The reach of internet is
highly
spread to all over world.
Thus
,
some
internet users post any kind of data on the internet without knowing that the
details
is accurate or not.
As a result
,
wrong
information
comes
first
while surfing on internet.

Internet in sea of knowledge,
but
because
of
many
fake data it became
hard
to
get
proper useful information over internet.
Moreover
, The incorrect info spread by reads
also
as they do not
check
the fact and believes what they read posts on websites. Not
only
individual post
wrong
info, there are
serval
companies
with runs fake ads over
many
social media to sell their products. By watching or reading
unsensible
ads or articles for
very
long time and
many
times a day will affects peoples
mind and
they will
start
thinking that the
details
was accurate.
For example
,
people
still
believes that fairness creams works as the
watch
in ads.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, anyone can post information on the internet even if it is incorrect. As a result, most of the information we read is inaccurate. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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