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nowadays anyone can post information on the internet even if is incorrect .As the result from most of the information we read is inaccurate to what exent do you agree or disagree

nowadays anyone can post information on the internet even if is incorrect. As the result from most of the information we read is inaccurate to what exent G6oo
Internet has become an indispensable part of our lives and now we can not deny the role of Internet. Internet is large source of information and majority of people get news and information via Internet but some people argue that sometimes the information available on the Internet is unauthenthic. Although Internet provide information regarding anything but I also believe that some information available on the Internet is not original. Admittedly, Internet has large database and it provide information of any kind. Firstly, Internet is integral Part of our lives in today stiff competition we surf on Internet on daily basis for taking many kinds of information. For an instance, it provides reliable information such as in case of education, most of students rely on Internet for their study and get large database to take material for their education which raise their academic performance. Secondly, there are some organizations which upload genuine information on Internet and win the loyality of users. Therefore, only correct information is taken by people. Moreover, in these days people are becoming aware about rumours which sometimes spread by those people who provoke people by providing unauthenthic data. Finally, Internet services provide instant service to people as we can take any information at any time as well as it is cheaper source in order to access information. On the other hand, everyone have access to Internet because Internet is available on the cell phones therefore, anyone can post information on Internet. Perhaps the information is not original which pose threat to people such as financial loss. For example, the business organizations exaggerates the advertisements pertaining to products and services. Thus, when people buy products they do not get gratification from products. Last but not least, the misinterpretation and misinformation can happen easily owing to those organizations which focus merely on their profits by delivering wrong information. To conclude, although Internet provide information about everything in these days yet I think that taking information from Internet sometimes give insufficient return because there are some group of people who upload unauthenthic information
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lives
and
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now
we can not deny the role of Internet. Internet is large source of
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information
and
It seems that an article is missing.
majority of
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people
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get
news and
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information
via Internet
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but
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some
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people
argue that
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sometimes
the
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information
available on the Internet is
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unauthenthic
. Although Internet
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provide
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information
regarding anything
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but
I
also
believe that
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some
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information
available on the Internet is not original.

Admittedly
, Internet has large database and it
Did you mean "provides"?
provide
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information
of any kind.
Firstly
, Internet is integral Part of our
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lives
in
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today
stiff competition we surf on Internet on daily basis for taking
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many
kinds of
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information
. For an instance, it
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provides
reliable
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information
such as in case of education,
After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the students") or simply say "most students".
most of students
rely on Internet for their study and
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get
large database to take material for their education which raise their academic performance.
Secondly
, there are
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some
organizations which upload genuine
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information
on Internet and win the
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loyality
of users.
Therefore
,
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only
correct
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information
is taken
by
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people
.
Moreover
, in these days
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people
are becoming aware about
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rumours
which
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sometimes
spread by those
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people
who provoke
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people
by providing
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unauthenthic
data.
Finally
, Internet services
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provide
instant service to
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people
as we can take any
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information
at any time
as well
as it is cheaper source in order to access information.

On the other hand
, everyone
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have
access to Internet
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because
Internet is available on the cell phones
therefore
, anyone can post
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information
on Internet. Perhaps the
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information
is not original which pose threat to
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people
such as financial loss.
For example
, the business organizations exaggerates the advertisements pertaining to products and services.
Thus
, when
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people
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buy
products they do not
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get
gratification from products. Last
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but
not least, the misinterpretation and misinformation can happen
easily
owing to those organizations which focus
merely
on their profits by delivering
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wrong
information.

To conclude
, although Internet
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provide
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information
about everything in these days
yet
I
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think
that taking
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information
from Internet
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sometimes
give insufficient return
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because
there are
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some
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group
of
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people
who upload
Possible spelling mistake found.
unauthenthic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
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IELTS essay nowadays anyone can post information on the internet even if is incorrect. As the result from most of the information we read is inaccurate to what exent

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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