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Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spend less and less time with their parents what is the reason for this

Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spend less and less time with their parents what is the reason for this MxLe

In the global era parents working every day without paying attention for their children. This can be cause negative effects on children behaviour. Initially, parents are going to make favorable conditions, and they are really take care of their children. However parents spend most of their times at work every day in order to get a high salary. In that time children get less observation, and they become a misbehave and unkind it can be worth and disconnection from social life.

In the global era parents working every day without paying attention for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
. This can Did you mean "because"?because
be cause
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
. Initially
, parents are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 favorable conditions, and they are really
Consider using a past participle here: "taken".taken
take
 care of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 parents spend most of their times at work every day in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a high salary. In that time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 less observation, and they become After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'misbehave' is correct. If 'misbehave' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a misbehave
 and unkind it can be worth and disconnection from social life. 