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Everyone who receives a salary needs to contribute a part of their wage to the non-profit-making organizations. It seems that this idea is not an adaptable activity for many of those, and this essay will explain it.

Everyone who receives a salary needs to contribute a part of their wage to the non-profit-making organizations. It seems that this idea is not an adaptable activity for many of those, and this essay will explain it. Firstly, The donation amount is unstable because it depends on an income and willingness of how much to give away. It is associated with individual voluntary, and if those were to provide assistance to vulnerable groups who need help. They would reach out without requirement. For instance, some people are concerned about earning money that is collected easily because this simplest way cannot lead to a successful result in some cases. Another negative factor is related to money. This is not only measurement of aid, and there are many kinds of methods that might support people. Giving advice, telling enthusiastic words, subscribing in some consumption or clothes needed some sectors tend to be promotion. This leads us to the final and perhaps most significant drawback to the endowment, variable income. Everybody admits a different amount of income that depends on their life pattern. For evidence, the director who works in a company has a better life guarantee financially than the cashier who employs in a shop. There are indeed some positives to donating; in society, influential organizations have to be responsible. Despite this, To conclude, the donation is a non-identical concept for all people, so whether or not to donate depends on the individual. But this is not to say that all those have not to hand money, there are another way to help.

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who
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explain
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Firstly
, The donation amount is unstable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it depends on an income and willingness of how much to give away. It is associated
 with individual voluntary, and if those were to provide assistance to vulnerable groups You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
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help
. They would reach out without requirement. For instance
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some
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people
are concerned
 about earning money that is collected
easily
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because
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some
 cases. Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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 to money. This is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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many
 kinds of methods that might support This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Giving advice, telling enthusiastic words, subscribing in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 consumption or clothes needed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sectors tend to be promotion. This leads us to the final and perhaps most significant drawback to the endowment, variable income. Everybody admits a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 amount of income that depends on their life pattern. For evidence, the director You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
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company
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 than the cashier You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 employs in a shop.

There are indeed
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some
 positives to donating; in society, influential organizations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be responsible. Despite this,

To conclude
, the donation is a non-identical concept for all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.whether
whether or not
 to donate depends on the individual. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 this is not to say that all those have not to hand money, there are another way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. 