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Nowadays, advertisement plays an important role on the sale of a product.

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Nowadays, advertisement plays an important role on the sale of a product. However, this technique is contradicting as many people not favor this. I am partially agreed with this business tactic and in this essay I would like to discuss in detail. To commence with, Digital and printed media are used for the publicity of products. It helps people to get the knowledge about the availability of the specific item. It also helps in getting more customers as people get attracted towards fancy ads. This is the reason that companies spend a large amount of money on advertisement of product. To exemplify, the coca cola company spend more than 50 percent of product cost on advertisement. On the other hand, publicizing the item is not the only factor affecting the sales. Quality of product, after services and durability plays a vital role in overall sale. For instance, big clothing brands do not spend much on publicity as they delivered premium quality of products. Brands like Versace, Gucci etc. need no introduction at any platform because they always focus on the quality and the durability. At last, as per me, a lot of factors decide the gross sale of any product. So a company must spend on all the things to get better business. Excessive advisements lead to compromise on other items, which is not good for company in long term. New Companies who spend too much on ads may initially grow at faster pace but after sometime when people will share their feedback about the product, it may cause loss in business. To conclude, it is not possible to do business without publicity but a real business person must not forget the business ethics of maintaining a global view point of supplying product of highest quality for customer satisfaction.
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people
not favor this. I am
partially
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business
tactic and in this essay I would like to discuss in detail.

To commence with, Digital and printed media are
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used
for the publicity of
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products
. It
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helps
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people
to
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get
the knowledge about the availability of the specific item. It
also
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helps
in getting more customers as
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people
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get
attracted towards fancy ads. This is the reason that
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companies
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spend
a large amount of money on
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advertisement of
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product
. To exemplify, the coca cola
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company
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spend
more than 50 percent of
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product
cost on advertisement.

On the other hand
, publicizing the item is not the
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only
factor affecting the
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sales
.
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Quality
of
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product
, after services and durability plays a vital role in
overall
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sale
.
For instance
,
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big
clothing brands do not
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spend
much on publicity as they delivered premium
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quality
of
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products
. Brands like Versace, Gucci etc. need no introduction at any platform
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because
they always focus on the
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quality
and the durability.

At last, as per me,
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a lot of
factors decide the gross
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sale
of any
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product
.
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a
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company
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must
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spend
on all the things to
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get
better
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business
. Excessive
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advisements
lead to compromise on other items, which is not
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good
for
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company
in long term. New
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Companies
who
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spend
too much on ads may
initially
grow at faster pace
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after sometime when
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people
will share their feedback about the
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product
, it may cause loss in business.

To conclude
, it is not possible to do
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business
without publicity
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but
a real
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business
person
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must
not forget the
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business
ethics of maintaining a global view point of supplying
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product
of
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highest
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quality
for customer satisfaction.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, advertisement plays an important role on the sale of a product.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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