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nowaday people are being sleepy, they have to drink something to keep them awake

nowaday people are being sleepy, they have to drink something to keep them awake QKO69

In the modern world, the living standard is upgraded. We are always looking for a drink to keep us awake to concentrate on studying or working, such as coffee, tea. Tea was being grown in China and India. To plant it they have to sow the tea seed under the soil, water it every day. The crucial thing to grow tea is sunshine, beautiful sunshine is a flawless thing essential to help farmers in the hard period, the plants will grow quicker. When the peak season comes, people have to pick the young leaves, cut it, and put them into the basket. After that, they will put the tea leaves under the sunshine again to let them dry, it is sweet-smelling when they become dried. Then, people have to choose young leaves, the selected will be packed into boxes carefully to avoid withered, after 3 months from it being packed not only is the tea taste good but also wonderful. In addition, that tea will be delivered to the supermarket.

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. We are always looking for a drink to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 us awake to concentrate on studying or working, such as coffee, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
Tea
 was being grown
 in China and India. To plant it they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 sow the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 seed under the soil, water it every day. The crucial thing to grow You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 is sunshine, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 sunshine is a flawless thing essential to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 farmers in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 period, the plants will grow quicker. When the peak season This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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have to
 pick the young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 it, and put them into the basket. After that, they will put the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 under the sunshine again to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 them dry, it is sweet-smelling when they become dried. Then, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 choose young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
, the selected will be packed
 into boxes carefully
 to avoid withered, after 3 months from it being packed
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 taste This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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but
also
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, that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 will be delivered
 to the supermarket. 