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In this new world personalities became a huge topic and they are born with that genes and character which cant be change and in the blow i will be elaborate my opinion. Now a day each and ever one are looking foreword to change there personalities to get more attracted in there social life as well as improving their self confidence some people are losing their self-confidence and not moving forward dude to there personalities and genes content which cont be changed but now a day's technology has evolved so vastly in modern science there are changing there personalities through plastic surgery and medication steroids. In olden days people are born with what they are gifted by and they all lead to a happy life they had there self confidence as well as moral support they accepted there family genes and move foreword with out comparing to others lifestyle but now a days celebrities are changing their personalities for there popularity and there social life's which are impacting present generation. Some people are also compare their life's with celebrities and movies stars and trying to change there personalities. There is huge problem when undergoing which medical science procedure which leads to there bad health and huge financial investment which effecting there stable life. To sum up i would say that people should accept there personalities which is followed buy there family genes As well as parents show teach there younger once that to accomplish their goal's and achievements They don't need any personalities

In this new world personalities became a huge Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).topic, and
topic and
 they are born
 with that genes and character which Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?can'tcannot
cant
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 and in the blow Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will be elaborate my opinion.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 a day each and Did you mean "every one"?every one
ever one
 are looking foreword to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 there personalities to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more attracted in there social life as well
 as improving their This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-confidence
self confidence
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some
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people
 are losing their self-confidence and not moving forward dude to Did you mean "their"?their
there
 personalities and genes content which cont be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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now
 a day's technology has evolved This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
vastly
 in modern science there are changing there personalities through plastic surgery and medication steroids.

In olden days You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are born
 with what they are gifted
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by and
 they all lead to a happy life they had there This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-confidence
self confidence
as well
 as moral support they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 there family genes and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 foreword This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 comparing to others lifestyle This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Did you mean "nowadays"?nowadays
now a days
 celebrities are changing their personalities for there popularity and there social life's which are impacting present generation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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people
 are also
Consider using a past participle here: "compared".compared
compare
 their life's with celebrities and movies stars and trying to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
Did you mean "their"?their
there
 personalities. There is huge problem when undergoing which medical science procedure which leads to there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 health and huge financial investment which effecting there stable life.

To sum up Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would say that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should accept there personalities which is followed
Did you mean "by" or "to buy"?byto buy
buy
 there family genes As well
 as parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 teach there younger once that to accomplish their goal's and achievements They don't need any personalities