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Now a day, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people lived? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

Now a day, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people lived? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Cooking is so delicious. Having people that enjoy the food that I prepare is the most amazing part, when I cook I enjoy a lot doing that but for my mom was not a diversion in the past. She used to spend too much time preparing the food for her children. She hardly had a few basic devices compared to what I currently have in my kitchen. That is why I do believe that nowadays food has become easier to prepare compared to the past and it has changed people live. Here are my reasons for my believing. There are an uncounted numbers of devices that help any cook to prepare the food faster. I have grinder, pressure cooker, blender and so on. I am able to prepare the most complicated recipe with the help of all the devices that I own. I put the ingredients in the blender to mix them very well an faster. For instance, my daughter doesn' t like to see all the food content like onion, garlic so when I prepare grounded meat I put all the ingredients in the blender, the final test is the same and she would not be encourage to see them in her dish. I even have an AIR fryer wish is a fryer that doesn' t need to put any oil to cook the food. With the simple mechanism of passing the food through hot heat and air the cook get cooked faster and the final result is healthier food prepared faster and easier. My mom never though to see one of this before. There is also a lot of resources that help me to prepare the most difficult recipe ever. With the simple fact to access to the internet I am able to find some YouTube tutorials that show me how to prepare any king of food. There is also some television programs that teach people how to prepare any food, and they demonstrated the way of preparation there. They also teach recipes as well. From cakes preparations to grill demonstration they makes that people want to prepare their food at home even for a person that doesn' t like to cook. My mom never had that before. Nowadays food preparation has become very rich in terms of diversity. People want to try food from different places. I remember before that we only ate food from our country. But now I love to experiment preparing food from other countries. We have for example, one Italian weekend, this is the one that my husband like the most. I enjoy preparing better the Chinese food and Bahamas’s food. I love how people from Bahamas mix different flavors like fruits and meat in their way of cooking and the final taste is amazing. Being able to prepare the food today, compared to the way that mom prepared food before has a positive impact on my family. As I have too many devices I make the food faster, I also have the help of internet and the television so I am able to spend more time with my them. I we also had become more creative incorporating new cuisine styles to our kitchen.
Cooking is
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delicious. Having
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people
that enjoy the
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food
that I
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prepare
is the most amazing part, when I cook I enjoy
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a lot doing
that
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for my
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mom
was not a diversion in the past. She
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used
to spend too much time preparing the
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food
for her children. She hardly had a few basic
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devices
compared to what I
currently
have in my kitchen.
That is
why I do believe that nowadays
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food
has become easier to
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prepare
compared to the past and it has
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changed
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people
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live
. Here are my reasons for my believing.

There are an uncounted
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numbers
of
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devices
that
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help
any cook to
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prepare
the
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food
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faster
. I have grinder, pressure cooker, blender and
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so
on. I am
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able
to
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prepare
the most complicated recipe with the
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help
of all the
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devices
that I
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own
.
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I
put the ingredients in the blender to mix them
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very
well
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an
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faster
.
For instance
, my daughter
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doesn&
#039; t like to
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see
all the
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food
content like onion, garlic
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so
when I
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prepare
grounded meat I put all the ingredients in the blender, the final
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test
is the
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same and
she would not be
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encourage
to
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see
them in her dish. I even have an AIR fryer wish is a fryer that
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doesn&
#039; t need to put any oil to cook the
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food
. With the simple mechanism of passing the
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food
through hot heat and air the cook
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get
cooked
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faster
and the final result is healthier
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food
prepared
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faster
and easier. My
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mom
never though to
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see
one of this
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before
.

There is
also
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a lot of
resources that
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help
me to
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prepare
the most difficult recipe ever. With the simple fact to access to the internet I am
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able
to find
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some
YouTube tutorials that
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show
me how to
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prepare
any king of
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food
. There is
also
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some
television programs that teach
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people
how to
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prepare
any
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food
, and they demonstrated the way of preparation there. They
also
teach recipes
as well
. From cakes preparations to grill demonstration they
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makes
that
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people
want to
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prepare
their
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food
at home even for a person that
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doesn&
#039; t like to cook. My
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mom
never had that
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before
.

Nowadays
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food
preparation has become
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very
rich in terms of diversity.
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People
want to try
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food
from
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different
places. I remember
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before
that we
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only
ate
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food
from our country.
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now
I
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to experiment preparing
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food
from other countries. We have
for example
, one Italian weekend, this is the one that my husband like the most. I enjoy preparing better the Chinese
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food
and Bahamas’s
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food
. I
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love
how
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people
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from Bahamas
mix
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different
flavors like fruits and meat in their way of cooking and the final taste is amazing.

Being
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able
to
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prepare
the
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food
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today
, compared to the way that
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mom
prepared
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food
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before
has a
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positive
impact on my family. As I have too
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many
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devices
I
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the
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food
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faster
, I
also
have the
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help
of internet and the television
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I am
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to spend more time with my them. I we
also
had become more creative incorporating new cuisine styles to our kitchen.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS essay Now a day, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people lived? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
531 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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