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Not enough students around the world choose to study science subject at university. What impact does this issue have on society?

Not enough students around the world choose to study science subject at university. What impact does this issue have on society? 3ppJ
Science is inevitable one in humans life. Firstly, Now a days, Students are showing interest to learn about creative technologies. For Example: MultiMedia, Game designing which does not require any science knowledge, easy as pie to learn. Job oppurtunity are on demand. And more over science subject are very theoritcal and algorithm. Due to these reason students not find anything interesting in science subjects. Secondly, In future, there is no growth in research and development, Lack for innovation which impact the world economic growth. Conculsion, In my opinion, Teaching method need to be changed from theoritcal to Artifiacal intelligence based class or more into practical class which make students understand the subject in very effective way. Reduce the fees or promote the science with extra scholer ship.
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, Game designing which does not require any
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knowledge, easy as pie to learn. Job
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oppurtunity
are on demand. And more over
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subject are
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theoritcal
and algorithm. Due to these reason students not find anything interesting in
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subjects.

Secondly
,
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In future
, there is no growth in research and development, Lack for innovation which impact the world economic growth.

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Conculsion
, In my opinion, Teaching method need to be
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effective way.
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the fees or promote the
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IELTS essay Not enough students around the world choose to study science subject at university. What impact does this issue have on society?

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