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In the present Era, there is no doubt that the biosphere is getting contaminated due to the excessive and false use of natural resources which results in the depletion of these sources. So, these environmental issues are becoming a growing concern. However, according to some ,people this issue can be rectified only by authorities and big companies. So, in my opinion, the government and large organisations can not ameliorate these issues alone without the participation of dwellers. To commence with, law enforcement agencies should consider some stringent laws regarding less usage of vehicles in order to reduce air pollution. Such as enforcing the laws of using public transport during working hours and doing communal car-pooling in busy times. As a result, a penalty can be provided in the form of a heavy fine to those who will flout these rules.In addition, the big industries are equally responsible for promoting and applying the concept of using renewable resources instead of non-ren

In the present Era, there is no doubt that the biosphere is getting contaminated due to the excessive and false use of natural resources which results in the depletion of these sources. So, these environmental issues are becoming a growing concern. However, according to some, people this issue can be rectified only by authorities and big companies. So, in my opinion, the government and large organisations can not ameliorate these issues alone without the participation of dwellers. To commence with, law enforcement agencies should consider some stringent laws regarding less usage of vehicles in order to reduce air pollution. Such as enforcing the laws of using public transport during working hours and doing communal car-pooling in busy times. As a result, a penalty can be provided in the form of a heavy fine to those who will flout these rules. In addition, the big industries are equally responsible for promoting and applying the concept of using renewable resources instead of non-renewable. For instance, using solar panels to generate electricity can save fossil fuels and natural gas can be saved by manufacturing and promoting electronic cars. Consequently, these big steps can bring a huge change in preserving our environment. Although, without the contribution of common people these changes are not feasible. Firstly and finally, they should spread the awareness of using common services in the matter of transport, which are buses and trains, and understand the importance of reducing the poisonous emissions in the air. For example, the best way to do so is by advertising whether on the television or by sticking the banners on the wall. Hence, even citizens play a crucial role in preserving the ecosystem. In conclusion, the government and large organisations can bring a massive change by considering some rules and developing new and innovative ideas to solve this, nevertheless, a big change starts from home when common people take the initiative to tackle the menace.

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use
 of natural resources which results in the depletion of these sources. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, these environmental issues are becoming a growing concern. However
, according to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 this issue can be rectified
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 by authorities and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, in my opinion, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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organisations
 can not ameliorate these issues alone without the participation of dwellers.

To commence with, law enforcement agencies should consider This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 stringent laws regarding less usage of vehicles in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 air pollution. Such as enforcing the laws of using public transport during working hours and doing communal car-pooling in busy times. As a result
, a penalty can be provided
 in the form of a heavy fine to those who will flout these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
. In addition
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
 industries are equally
 responsible for promoting and applying the concept of using renewable resources instead
 of non-renewable. For instance
, using solar panels to generate electricity can save fossil fuels and natural gas can be saved
 by manufacturing and promoting electronic cars. Consequently
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
 steps can bring a huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 in preserving our environment.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, without the contribution of common This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 are not feasible. Firstly
 and finally
, they should spread the awareness of using common services in the matter of transport, which are buses and trains, and understand the importance of reducing the poisonous emissions in the air. For example
, the best way to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 is by advertising whether on the television or by sticking the banners on the wall. Hence
, even citizens play a crucial role in preserving the ecosystem.

In conclusion
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 and large Possible spelling mistake. 'organisations' is British English.organizations
organisations
 can bring a massive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 by considering This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and developing new and innovative This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 to solve this, nevertheless
, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from home when common This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 take the initiative to tackle the menace. 