Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective. RaaG
According to various reports criminal activities tend to be on an increase in majority of the nations, and is prevalent among youth. In this essay we will identify various factors responsible, subsequently find out remedies available to us. Firstly the major cause responsible for escalation of unlawful activates is perhaps there is explosive growth in poverty due to increased cost of living, unaffordable educational fee, scarcity of jobs, etc. Consequently people find indulging in criminal activities as an only option for survival. Unless the government doesn't step in and take concrete steps, the complications would be unimaginable. For example, subsidizing food, shelter and education for various people falling under below poverty line, meanwhile providing incentives and other benefits. Secondly the increased prevalence of indulging in these activities could be addiction and peer pressure.
According to various reports criminal activities tend to be on an increase in majority of the nations, and is prevalent among youth. In this essay we will identify various factors responsible,
subsequently
find out remedies available to us.

Firstly
the major cause responsible for escalation of unlawful activates is perhaps there is explosive growth in poverty due to increased cost of living, unaffordable educational fee, scarcity of jobs, etc.
Consequently
people
find indulging in criminal activities as an
only
option for survival. Unless the
government
doesn't step in and take concrete steps, the complications would be unimaginable.
For example
, subsidizing food, shelter and education for various
people
falling under below poverty line, meanwhile providing incentives and other benefits.

Secondly
the increased prevalence of indulging in these activities could be addiction and peer pressure.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
133 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts