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No Doubt, developing technology has many positive effects on society but, negative effects are more. What do you think, give your views.

No Doubt, developing technology has many positive effects on society but, negative effects are more. What do you think, give your views. E3PeR
In today's era, the increasing advancement of Machinery has made people work very easy. Everyone is taking benefits of different technology. However, it has both positive and negative impact on society, described it in the below paragraphs. Firstly, consistently growth in technologies has made possible for people to do work online. Everyone prefer to do work remotely through their Mobile Phones, Laptops, Tabs and computers. Like, Developers who are working in IT Company they do work from home in COVID time. People have benefited more from the multimedia Mobile phones. Through Mobile phones, it has become possible for people to make audio call and video call to near dear ones, whether they lives in abroad or same country. Secondly, Technology has also many negative effects like it made people very lazy. People do not want to do hard work. They wish that everything is on online. For example, Most people prefer to do online shopping through online shopping websites rather than go in Malls and Shops. Due to everything to be online, usage of Mobiles and Laptops has been increased. It has bad effect on our health like eyesight, anxiety, headache, giddiness, migraine and many more. In conclusion, Everything has advantages and Disadvantages. People should take benefits of new Technological things, but as much as they need. Things can become dangerous when people use it excessively.
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very
easy. Everyone is taking benefits of
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different
technology.
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impact on society,
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described
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Firstly
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people
to do
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work
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online
. Everyone
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prefer
to do
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remotely
through their Mobile Phones, Laptops, Tabs and computers. Like, Developers who are working in IT
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Company
they do
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work
from home in
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COVID
time.
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People
have benefited more from the multimedia Mobile phones. Through Mobile phones, it has become possible for
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people
to
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make
audio call and video call to near dear ones, whether they
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lives
in abroad or same country.

Secondly
, Technology has
also
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many
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negative
effects like it made
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people
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very
lazy.
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do not want to do
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hard
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. They wish that everything is on
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online
.
For example
, Most
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people
prefer to do
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shopping through
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online
shopping websites
rather
than go in Malls and Shops. Due to everything to be
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online
, usage of Mobiles and Laptops has
been increased
. It has
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bad
effect on our health like eyesight, anxiety, headache, giddiness, migraine and
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more.

In conclusion
, Everything has advantages and Disadvantages.
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People
should take benefits of new Technological things,
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as much as they need. Things can become
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dangerous
when
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people
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use
it
excessively
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IELTS essay No Doubt, developing technology has many positive effects on society but, negative effects are more. What do you think, give your views.

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