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Newspaper have influenced people's ideas and opinion.Discuss positive and negative development of the same.

Newspaper have influenced people's ideas and opinion. Discuss positive and negative development of the same. 8dPEk
In this informative world when the information is become handy the role of newspaper become crucial in every phase. It is believe that newspaper effect people's mind and their thought process. This essay will discuss both good and bad effect on the society. To begin with, newspaper aware the common folk about the discrimination, gender, new rules and regulation etc. It also reveal the truth about famous personalities, politicians, about where they spending the money of people and it help to vote the true politicians. Printing media also help to vote the true politicians. Printing media also help to people to tell about history of the any country. Newspaper support the people who are doing march against the bad things. It helps to student for the preparation of the exam. It also acknowledge the people about new technologies. On the other side newspaper influence people by advertising such products that they do not want to buy. In the election time if they support certain party it may be happen that the wrong politicians could be win. If newspaper printed politician's bad statements it could be possible that masses encourage do certain activities that damage properties. In conclusion newspaper help people to know about the present situation but it also affect the people's mind in some way.
In this informative world when the information
is become
handy the role of
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newspaper
become crucial in every phase. It is
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believe
that
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newspaper
effect
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people
's mind and their
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thought
process. This essay will discuss both
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good
and
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bad
effect on the society.

To
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begin
with,
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newspaper
aware the common folk about the discrimination, gender, new
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rules
and regulation etc. It
also
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reveal
the truth about
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famous
personalities,
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politicians
, about where
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they spending
the money of
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people
and it
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help
to vote the true
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politicians
. Printing media
also
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help
to vote the true
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politicians
. Printing media
also
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help
to
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people
to
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tell
about history of the any country.
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Newspaper
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support
the
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people
who are doing march against the
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bad
things. It
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helps
to student for the preparation of the exam. It
also
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acknowledge
the
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people
about new technologies.

On the other side
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newspaper
influence
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people
by advertising such products that they do not want to
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buy
. In the election time if they support certain party it
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may be
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happen
that the
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wrong
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politicians
could be
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win
.
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If
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newspaper
printed politician's
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bad
statements it could be possible that masses encourage do certain activities that damage properties.

In conclusion
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newspaper
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help
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people
to know about the present situation
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but
it
also
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affect
the
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people
's mind in
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some
way.
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IELTS essay Newspaper have influenced people's ideas and opinion. Discuss positive and negative development of the same.

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