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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.4

Introduction of media had played enormous part in spreading information among masses. Many events are generally broad s in the pictorial form by both print and digital media, which a number of individuals consider to have more influence than words. I partially agree with this statement. This essay will discuss how effective both pictures and words are in detail. To list information is understood much better through images, moreover expressions can be understood even by illiterate people who cannot read. Looking at visuals gives an overview of the story without even reading lengthy articles in newspapers. Watching seems helpful than mere hearing and reading, to quote individuals who are deaf tend to acquire knowledge by looking to pictures. Another very famous example of strong impact of pictures is of Amul company, it has advertisements in images so that its message could reach to the wider population. On the other hand, information is half gained without reading or hearing the whole incidence. It gives clear idea of what actually happened, for instance some pictures shows a criminal killing someone which will not be able to tell us the whole truth. Like what made him to do this, only reading helps us give details of his life’s history. I think both pictures and words play vast role in depicting a story, hence awaring public. Looking just on pictures can keep people in dark and it clearly results in spread of rumours and misinformation in the community. In retrospection, to my opinions above I would say that media is a great tool of communication in our society and every form of it should be experienced and encouraged. Reading and watching news along with news is additional bonus for individuals.
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events
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broad s in the pictorial form by both print and digital media, which a number of individuals consider to have more influence than words. I
partially
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agree
with this statement. This essay will discuss how effective both
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pictures
and words are in detail.

To list information
is understood
much better through images,
moreover
expressions can
be understood
even by illiterate
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people
who cannot read. Looking at visuals gives an overview of the story without even
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reading
lengthy articles in newspapers. Watching seems helpful than mere hearing and
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reading
, to quote individuals who are deaf tend to acquire knowledge by looking to
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pictures
. Another
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very
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famous
example of strong impact of
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pictures
is of
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Amul
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company
, it has advertisements in images
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so
that its message could reach to the wider population.

On the other hand
, information is half gained without
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reading
or hearing the whole incidence. It gives
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clear
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idea
of what actually happened,
for instance
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some
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pictures
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shows
a criminal killing someone which will not be able to
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tell
us the whole truth. Like what made him to do this,
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only
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reading
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helps
us give
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details
of his life’s history. I
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think
both
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pictures
and words play vast role in depicting a story,
hence
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awaring
public. Looking
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just
on
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keep
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people
in
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dark and
it
clearly
results in spread of
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rumours
and misinformation in the community.

In retrospection, to my opinions above I would say that media is a great tool of communication in our society and every form of it should
be experienced
and encouraged.
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Reading
and watching news along with news is additional bonus for individuals.
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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