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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.3

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 3
In recent times, it has been noticed that a vast majority of newspapers and television channels are publishing news stories with relevant images. Many people believe that it is a more effective way to present news stories among people. I strongly believe in this fact that inserting pictures in the text containing news stories is a more constructive way to present ideas. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion further with relevant supporting reasons and examples. To begin with, people learn more effectively by a visual representation of factual information rather than reading it. Humans are less enthusiastic and energetic to read texts, they feel more comfortable in seeing information visually instead. So, newspapers should insert some kind of images related to the subject of news stories. Inserting images could help people to understand the topic. One thing you should know about the visual representation is that the human mind is more effective when they watch a picture or image instead of reading the entire text. Therefore, televisions and newspapers should publish news stories with some visual images rather than large text or speech. Furthermore, the news stories, containing pictures or images, would be helpful for people in order to save their important time. Because reading text takes a long time, people feel bored while reading. Also, when they read the full text then they have to be alert and attentive to avoid any confusion. In many newspapers, for instance, some articles could be longer and take a longer time to read it. In this case, it should be better to conclude the large information into a single picture or image. Thus, it could be helpful for people to save their crucial time. Lastly, a large number of people, who are illiterate and unable to read, found it very useful while looking at pictures showing news stories. However, they still have to struggle with the understanding of keywords related to the mentioned images. Moreover, it is really important for children, who are unable to read complex texts, to understand the meaning of the large news stories. For example, nowadays, most of the newspapers publish their headlines using some factual pictures, which are easy to understand for children. To sum up, I would like to say that publishing and broadcasting news stories visually is more effective than other modes of news. It has a plethora of benefits of visualizing the factual information, such as huge time savings, easy to understand the topic, and illiterate people are able to understand without reading the whole text.
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news
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stories
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images
.
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people
believe that it is a more effective way to present
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news
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stories
among
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. I
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pictures
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news
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people
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it. Humans are less enthusiastic and energetic to
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texts
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Furthermore
, the
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the meaning of the
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publish their headlines using
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understand
for children.

To sum up, I would like to say that publishing and broadcasting
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news
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visually
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news
. It has a plethora of benefits of visualizing the factual
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the topic, and illiterate
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19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
83Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
424 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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