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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. v.20

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. v. 20
With the high flow of industrial evolution the television and other electronic gadgets are the one who spontaneously got increased. And along with this, the journalism and media industries had also grown very fast. Now, to get the maximum publicity it is necessary for every news company to provide each and every information with minimum difficulty, so that everyone can understand it regardless of being literate or illiterate. For this, it is conditional to use pictures. Some people say that these photos are more effective than words and I also believe it. My opinion is argued further. Firstly, pictures are called to be a Universal language. Photos can be understood by any person whether it is from any culture or country. For example, if a person is from a different country and he/she is not able to comprehend the local language from newspaper or TV then he cannot know what is going on in the country. But, if there is a picture of showing an accident in the nearby area, then he/she will get the gist of the incident. Moreover, it is easy to describe any situation with the picture then describing through words. The single snap of the situation can tell everything about the incident very quickly and almost effortlessly. On the contrary, there are some situations where it is necessary to use words because it cannot be explained Via photos. Since, sometimes the pictorial explanation can be offensive to some people or the content is sensitive, the words are the great help. In addition, for the pictorial representation, the considerable amount of the equipments and technology is required. As not every channel or press is financially capable enough to do that, representation of words is a better option. To conclude the whole scenario, the snaps instead of words are turned out to be a better option. However, it is costly and skillfull but it is surely a better choice in terms of providing information to people of every genre and culture. So, to attract the maximum public, the photographic explanation is the best path which leads the organization to good and profitable business.
With the high flow of industrial evolution the television and other electronic gadgets are the one who
spontaneously
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got
increased. And along with this, the journalism and media industries had
also
grown
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very
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fast
.
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Now
, to
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get
the maximum publicity it is necessary for every news
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company
to provide each and every information with minimum difficulty,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that everyone can understand it regardless of being literate or illiterate. For this, it is conditional to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
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pictures
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
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people
say that these photos are more effective than words and I
also
believe it. My opinion
is argued
further
.

Firstly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
are called
to be a Universal language. Photos can
be understood
by any person whether it is from any culture or country.
For example
, if a person is from a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
country and
he/she is not able to comprehend the local language from newspaper or TV then he cannot know what is going on in the country.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, if there is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
picture
of showing an accident in the nearby area, then he/she will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the gist of the incident.
Moreover
, it is easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
any situation with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
picture
then describing through words.

The single snap of the situation can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
everything about the incident
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
quickly
and almost
effortlessly
.

On the contrary
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
situations where it is necessary to
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use
words
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it cannot be
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explained
Via photos. Since,
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sometimes
the pictorial explanation can be offensive to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
or the content is sensitive, the words are the great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
In addition
, for the pictorial representation, the considerable amount of the equipments and technology
is required
. As not every channel or press is
financially
capable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to do that, representation of words is a better option.

To conclude
the whole scenario, the snaps
instead
of words
are turned
out to be a better option.
However
, it is costly and
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skillfull
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
surely
a better choice in terms of providing information to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of every genre and culture.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, to attract the maximum public, the photographic explanation is the best path which leads the organization to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and profitable business.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this. v. 20

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
355 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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