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News stories on tv and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats is your opinion about this?

News stories on tv and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats is your opinion about this? n661o
It is debatable issue what to consider the image or the text in yerms of giving news. People's opinion differ as to whether follow the image presentation or theoretical facts about some reports about any relevant news. Both the views will be discussed with my personal perspective in impending paragraphs. To commence with, pictures and words are both powerful while providing report about any issue. First and foremost, almost every media provide factual information in theoretical state as to make the understanding of the related concern because it is quite easy to read the words and moreover, it is beneficial to inculcate the knowledge about language more deeply. For instance, Editors of newspaper use such words that are high in vocabulary and thus improve the linguistic qualitues of a reader. Other people advocates that, pictorial explanation is more vigorous than words for telling about any situation as content is clearly manifest to the viewer also, showing news with images tend to accu. ulate the interest of news seeker because graphucs attracts more visitors to one's channel. To cite an example, in a recent survey it was found that 85% of the news reader consider reading newspaper due to statistics shpwn in them. In conclusion, i would like to ingeminate that Editors of newspaper should provide news with its graphical illustrations as it led to increase the curiosity of youngsters as well to go through news on daily basis also, there will be not any misinterpretation regarding the content given about some news.
It is debatable issue what to consider the image or the text in
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yerms
of giving
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news
.
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People
's opinion differ
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as to whether
follow the image presentation or theoretical facts about
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some
reports about any relevant
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news
. Both the views will
be discussed
with my personal perspective in impending paragraphs. To commence with, pictures and words are both powerful while providing report about any issue.
First
and foremost, almost every
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media
provide factual information in theoretical state as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the understanding of the related concern
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because
it is quite easy to read the words and
moreover
, it is beneficial to inculcate the knowledge about language more
deeply
.
For instance
, Editors of newspaper
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use
such words that are high in vocabulary and
thus
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improve
the linguistic
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qualitues
of a reader. Other
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people
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advocates
that, pictorial explanation is more vigorous than words for telling about any situation as content is
clearly
manifest to the viewer
also
, showing
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news
with images tend to
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accu
.
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ulate
the interest of
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news
seeker
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because
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graphucs
attracts more visitors to one's channel. To cite an example, in a recent survey it
was found
that 85% of the
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news
reader consider reading newspaper due to statistics
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shpwn
in them.
In conclusion
,
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i
would like to
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ingeminate
that Editors of newspaper should provide
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news
with its graphical illustrations as it led to increase the curiosity of youngsters
as well
to go through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
on daily basis
also
, there will be not any misinterpretation regarding the content
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
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IELTS essay News stories on tv and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats is your opinion about this?

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