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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? v.5

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? v. 5
All people know about television and newspaper are the best way to get new information and knowledge. Revisers can establish how to announce on TV and to publish in newspapers, in some cases there are several immoral effects to their resolutions. In current days, bad announcement gets more viewer than good announcement because of people’s interest and way of presentation. In my opinion, there is some causes which affects rewriters’ agreement and they should present only favorable information to population. Visibly, editors can publish everything which is they want in newspapers and announce on TV, there are various bad impacts for these situation. Nowadays, they try to present which news gains a lot of popularity, especially bad reports are admired by people and these can attract a lot of people around the world. For instance, if revisers print about up-to-date people’s personal lives such as actors, politicians and sportsmen, they can addict lots of people to these kinds of announcements. After that they make a lot of money from advertisements like this. On the other hand, more people would rather to know or to search bad information than good ones because people are interested in bad news, so editors also print more harmful announcements than simple or not attractive news. In my view, news companies should present more good information than bad ones. For instance, BBC editors or other companies should inform valuable news, after that it helps to improve the thinking of individual and national development. Thus, it is right of the editor to present only that news which is true and real. To conclude, public interest, choice, profit and publicity there is the main factor which influences the editor for the time of broadcasting. I do believe it is significant that we should change the unreal advertisements to the real ones for improving our thinking.
All
people
know about television and newspaper are the best way to
get
new
information
and knowledge. Revisers can establish how to announce on TV and to publish in newspapers, in
some
cases there are several immoral effects to their resolutions. In
current
days,
bad
announcement
gets
more viewer than
good
announcement
because
of
people’s
interest and way of presentation. In my opinion, there is
some
causes which affects
rewriters
agreement and
they should
present
only
favorable
information
to population.

Visibly
, editors can publish everything which is they want in newspapers and announce on TV, there are various
bad
impacts for
these situation
. Nowadays, they try to
present
which
news
gains a
lot
of popularity,
especially
bad
reports
are admired
by
people
and these can attract a
lot
of
people
around the world.
For instance
, if revisers print about up-to-date
people’s
personal
lives
such as actors, politicians and sportsmen, they can addict
lots
of
people
to these kinds of
announcements
.
After
that they
make
a
lot
of money from advertisements like this.

On the other hand
, more
people
would
rather
to know or to search
bad
information
than
good
ones
because
people
are interested
in
bad
news
,
so
editors
also
print more harmful
announcements
than simple or not attractive
news
. In my view,
news
companies
should
present
more
good
information
than
bad
ones
.
For instance
, BBC editors or other
companies
should inform valuable
news
, after that it
helps
to
improve
the thinking of individual and national development.
Thus
, it is right of the editor to
present
only
that
news
which is true and real.

To conclude
, public interest, choice, profit and publicity there is the main factor which influences the editor for the time of broadcasting. I do believe it is significant that we should
change
the unreal advertisements to the real
ones
for improving our thinking.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
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