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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? rating, cook up new, false stories, demote cultural values, long terms side effects Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? rating, cook up new, false stories, demote cultural values, long terms side effects Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? 3O0J
News editors are the selector of news to broadcast on television and in print media. They are mostly concerned about the ratings and do not think about the effects. As a result, the industry is known as a mafia and the source of bad news. While it far better to report the positive sides of our society, promote the cultural values and create awareness in people. Firstly, today in the fast-paced world, media people care more about short-term benefits such as getting more views. They do this by cooking up news if they do not have, and sell false stories to people, for instance, giving breaking news about the engagement or divorce of celebrities. While underestimating the consequences, they demote their culture and promote sexually explicit art. Hence, they will be able to get the target ratings but will have long-term side effects on the future of the younger generation. Secondly, the viewers have also become used to bad news and feel jubilant while watching and sharing it. There is a solution to provide people with an alternative, such as Sufism. For example, though Hollywood and Bollywood are at the peak, the Turkish serial Ertugrul is highly rated in various Asian countries, which is based on history and does not contain any adult material. It is far better to create awareness in people about recent research about environmental threats, awareness schemes about increasing pollution, positive image of the society, and websites for free online education such as Coursera, through media. Moreover, eminent personalities can show a better face and prepare the youth to face the challenges of tomorrow. In conclusion, the nominators merely care about the ratings and demote the cultural values, which has a cathode impact on society. They can play a primary role in rectification and create awareness in people by educating them about future threats and how to cope with them.
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News
editors are the selector of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
to broadcast on television and in print media. They are
mostly
concerned about the ratings and do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about the effects.
As a result
, the industry
is known
as a mafia and the source of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
. While it far better to report the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
sides of our society, promote the cultural values and create
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
awareness
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

Firstly
,
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today
in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
-paced world, media
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
care more about short-term benefits such as getting more views. They do this by cooking up
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
if they do not have, and sell false stories to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
,
for instance
, giving breaking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
about the engagement or divorce of celebrities. While underestimating the consequences, they demote their culture and promote
sexually
explicit art.
Hence
, they will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the target ratings
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
will have long-term side effects on the future of the younger generation.

Secondly
, the viewers have
also
become
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used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
and feel jubilant while watching and sharing it. There is a solution to provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with an alternative, such as Sufism.
For example
, though Hollywood and Bollywood are at the peak, the Turkish serial
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Ertugrul
is
highly
rated in various Asian countries, which
is based
on history and does not contain any adult material. It is far better to create
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
awareness
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
about recent research about environmental threats,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
awareness
schemes about increasing pollution,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
image of the society, and websites for free online education such as Coursera, through media.
Moreover
, eminent personalities can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
a better face and prepare the youth to face the challenges of tomorrow.

In conclusion
, the nominators
merely
care about the ratings and demote the cultural values, which has a cathode impact on society. They can play a primary role in rectification and create
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
awareness
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
by educating them about future threats and how to cope with them.
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IELTS essay News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? rating, cook up new, false stories, demote cultural values, long terms side effects Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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