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News AND NEWS PAPERS AND ITS IMPORTANCE O N YOUNG GERERATION

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I do agree that, in todays world, very few young peolpe read newspapers or follow the news on TV. The current generation is more inclined towards entertainment in the form of video games, web series, sports and movies. The paper reading and watching news on television do not provide any sort of fun to the young people so they avoid viewing or reading news related documents. The other reason could be that yougsters are busy in their academics for instance going to schools, collefes and completing their home work, consequently they are too busy to wach and read any article related to news. The third reason could be of Interest, the teenagers do now like news channels and reading newspapers as it is not of their genre. The only do stuffs which excites them. There is a fault on part of the publishing agencies and news broadcasting channels too as they elaborate too much on a particular topic which at times become frustrating for the readers and viewers. Having said that, the news agencies foucs on news which are less important and creates more drama to gain viewership. Such business tactics are generally not appreciated by the young generation. Nevertheless, it is utmost vital to be aware of the events happening locally and globally. With the world becoming a global village, happeings around the globe should not be avoided and the young crowd should be aware of the happenings around them. This will help them to stay updated and crack interviews related to a jor or interships. To involve more young crowd towards news, the articles printed should be relevant and upto the point. The news should no be biased. Newspapers should come up with pictorial representations which will attract readers attention. The primary and secondary school should conduct sessions where the importance of such information is shared among the students. Being in my teenage, I was never interestd in newspapers and watching news, soon realising the need of the same I started showning liking towards this genre by making a habit of reading newspapers for a minimum period of 10 minutes daily. This one habit assisted me in staying aware and up to date of the events happening accross the globe. My dad used to compulsorily make be sit and read all the news headlines appeared on the television early morning for five minutes a day. Hence, even though the young population do not really are interested in news it is crucial to make them undertsnd the importance of the same and to help them excel in life.
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young
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or follow the
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on TV.

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current
generation is more inclined towards entertainment in the form of video games, web series, sports and movies.

The paper
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reading
and watching
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news
on television do not provide any sort of fun to the
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young
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people
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so
they avoid viewing or
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reading
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news
related documents.
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The
other reason could be that
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yougsters
are busy in their academics
for instance
going to schools,
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collefes
and completing their home work,
consequently
they are too busy to
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wach
and read any article related to news.

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The
third reason could be of Interest, the
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teenagers
do
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now
like
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news
channels and
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reading
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newspapers
as it is not of their genre.
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The
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only
do stuffs which excites them.

There is a fault on part of the publishing agencies and
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news
broadcasting channels too as they elaborate too much on a particular topic which at times become frustrating for the readers and viewers.

Having said that, the
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news
agencies
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foucs
on
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news
which are less
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important
and creates more drama to gain viewership. Such business tactics are
generally
not appreciated by the
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young
generation.

Nevertheless
, it is utmost vital to be aware of the
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events
happening
locally
and globally. With the world becoming a global village,
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happeings
around the globe should not
be avoided
and the
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young
crowd should be aware of
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the happenings around them
. This will
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help
them to stay updated and crack interviews related to a
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jor
or
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interships
.

To involve more
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young
crowd towards
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news
, the articles printed should be relevant and
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upto
the point. The
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news
should
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no
be biased
.

Newspapers should
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come
up with pictorial representations which will attract readers attention. The primary and secondary school should conduct sessions where the importance of such information
is shared
among the students.

Being in my teenage, I was never
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interestd
in
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newspapers
and watching
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news
,
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soon
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realising
the need of the same I
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started
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showning
liking towards this genre by making a habit of
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reading
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newspapers
for a minimum period of 10 minutes daily.

This one habit assisted me in staying aware and up to date of the
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events
happening
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accross
the globe.

My dad
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used
to
compulsorily
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make
be sit and read all the
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news
headlines appeared on the television early morning for five minutes a day.

Hence
,
even though
the
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young
population do not
really
are interested
in
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news
it is crucial to
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make
them
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undertsnd
the importance of the same and to
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help
them excel in life.
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IELTS essay News AND NEWS PAPERS AND ITS IMPORTANCE O N YOUNG GERERATION

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
429 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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