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new ways of buying and selling are positively changing the lives of comsumers

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Nowaday, because of covid – 19 disease, the government requests people stay at home, traditional markets are closed, electronic commerce becomes familiar with customers. More and more people choose shopping online instead of going out. So I can said that new ways of buying and selling are positively changing the lives of comsumers. In many ways, new technologies make shopping is more convenient. Buyers can buy anything they want just by one click, paying immediately and waitting for shipper transports goods to them. Customers do not need go to the store, find in single shelf the product they call for. On the other hand, in some circumstance, comsumers feel that carry a huge quantity of good by themselves is a troublesome job. New technologies can slove this problem, it helps comsumers save their time, buying without inhibition. For example, comsumers can buy clothes on Amazon website and they can also pay for it by card or by cash on delivery. A few day later, the package will be moved for them. Moreover, most of products are sold on the internet have feedback from the other who have a certain time to use it. Buyers can rely on information to compare product quality with other shop and make decision. Besides, shop-assistant must improve their goods and service to attract customers. For instance, if you go to eBay search for the thing you care, you will see the line called product ratings from one to five star, with gradual satisfaction. In conclusion, I totally agree that new ways of purchasing and trading make people’s lives change positively. The hole world is in the fourth industrial revolution, people should acquaint with technology to make sure that they are not left behind.
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Nowaday
,
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because
of
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covid
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–
19 disease, the
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government
requests
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people
stay at home, traditional markets
are closed
, electronic commerce becomes familiar with customers. More and more
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people
choose
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shopping
online
instead
of going out.
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So
I can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "say"
said
that
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new
ways of buying and selling are
positively
changing the
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lives
of
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comsumers
.

In
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many
ways,
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new
technologies
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make
shopping is more convenient. Buyers can
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buy
anything they want
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just
by one click, paying immediately and
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waitting
for shipper transports
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goods
to them. Customers do not need
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go
to the store, find in single shelf the
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product
they call for.
On the other hand
, in
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some
circumstance,
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comsumers
feel that carry a huge quantity of
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good
by themselves is a troublesome job.
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New
technologies
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can slove
this problem, it
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helps
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comsumers
save their time, buying without inhibition.
For example
,
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comsumers
can
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buy
clothes on Amazon
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website and
they can
also
pay for it by card or by cash on delivery. A few day later, the package will be
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moved
for them.

Moreover
, most of
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products
are sold
on the internet have feedback from the other who have a certain time to
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use
it. Buyers can rely on information to compare
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product
quality with other shop and
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make
decision.
Besides
, shop-assistant
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must
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improve
their
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goods
and service to attract customers.
For instance
, if you go to eBay search for the thing you care, you will
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see
the line called
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product
ratings from one to five star, with gradual satisfaction.

In conclusion
, I
totally
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agree
that
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new
ways of purchasing and trading
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make
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people’s
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lives
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change
positively
. The hole world is in the fourth industrial revolution,
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people
should acquaint with technology to
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make
sure that they are not
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left
behind.
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IELTS essay new ways of buying and selling are positively changing the lives of comsumers

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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