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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers

There is no doubt that shopping habits have changed drastically these days due to the advent of virtual market platforms. lots of people rely on these platforms in their daily shopping. however, the question of whether the e-commerce has positive or negative impacts on people is arguably the most perplexing matter. this essay however, aims to discuss such an intricate issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion. To start with, it’s irrefutable that the internet has participate conspicuously on the latest shopping behavior. Firstly, people nowadays can explore a plethora of international items which’s existed in several e-shops via the internet. For instance, Amazon and Alibaba are the most common e-shops globally. many individuals use such platforms to find, compare, and even read the reviews of other users. these features are impossible to have in the conventional shopping habits. Hence, lots of people prefer this kind of shopping as an effortless method for shopping a high quality product with reasonable prices. On the flip side, virtual markets are not applicable for everything. First off all, various items need to be tested before purchasing such as shoes, T-shirts, and many other products. As, the customers can not be able to count on the sellers description for something very hard to describe such as a fabric or the size. Furthermore, any mistake in the requested product might be extremely inconvenient as it should be returned back through a courier and waiting until fixing this problem. To sum up, undoubtedly, e-commerce has evolve the shopping habits for many people around the word. Nevertheless, these platforms are not 100 percent reliable and lots of errors might happen and make such an experience very bad
There is no doubt that
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habits have
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changed
drastically
these days due to the advent of virtual market
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platforms
.
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lots
of
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people
rely on these
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platforms
in their daily
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shopping
.
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however
,
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the question of whether
the e-commerce has
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positive
or
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negative
impacts on
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people
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is
arguably
the most perplexing matter.
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this
essay
however
, aims to discuss such an intricate issue in
further
detail and
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before
coming to a conclusion. To
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start
with, it’s irrefutable that the internet has
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participate
conspicuously
on the latest
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shopping
behavior.
Firstly
,
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people
nowadays can explore a plethora of international items which’s existed in several e-shops via the internet.
For instance
, Amazon and Alibaba are the most common e-shops globally.
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many
individuals
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use
such
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platforms
to find, compare, and even read the reviews of other users.
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these
features are impossible to have in the conventional
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shopping
habits.
Hence
, lots of
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people
prefer this kind of
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shopping
as an effortless method for
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shopping
a high quality product with reasonable prices. On the flip side, virtual markets are not applicable for everything.
First
off all, various items need to be
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tested
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before
purchasing such as shoes, T-shirts, and
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many
other products. As, the customers can not be able to count on the
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sellers
description for something
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very
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hard
to
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describe
such as a fabric or the size.
Furthermore
, any mistake in the requested product might be
extremely
inconvenient as it should be
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returned back
through a courier and waiting until fixing this problem. To sum up,
undoubtedly
, e-commerce has
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evolve
the
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shopping
habits for
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many
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people
around the word.
Nevertheless
, these
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platforms
are not 100 percent reliable and lots of errors might happen and
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make
such an experience
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very
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bad
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IELTS essay New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
282 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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