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New food products like GMO (genetically modified organism) threats food security. What is the positive and negative affect of GMO added products?

New food products like GMO (genetically modified organism) threats food security. What is the positive and negative affect of GMO added products? 15AMN
Nowadays, there are GMO products everywhere. The GMOs are too dangerous for our health and they cause cancer. The GMO means Genetic Modified Organisms. Viruses, plant, animal and human cells can belong to GMO. Based to endocrinologist-nutritionist-Salim Asadov's words: The GMO products can affect chronic effects like allergic, toxic and cancer. In order to can distinguish, have to be special label on the GMO products, feeds and seeds. It is not healthy to get eggs, milk and meat form animals fed GMOs. Also, this has been proven in the laboratory. The reason for this, these products can create antibiotic-resistant bacteria. After humans fed with GMOs, these bacterias gradually begin to affect. Because we don't fed massive, basically these ingredient are given to products as soya, popcorn and etc. Based on animal experiments, some damages have been detected. For example, gastric ulcer have been detected in the mouse of feded with genetic modified tomato. In additionally, dysfunction of liver and pancreas have been detected in the mouse of feded with GMOs. Such products of causing damage in the animals, imagine how damages cause in the human. What is the purpose of planting these crops? Day by day the humans' count increases that's why the specialists want to increase the productivity of plants. In order to increase the tolerance of plant to environment and ensure the abundance of products, such crops are prepared. Due to protest, GMOs haven't already been used in Europe since 1990. Even, these products have been banned entering to our country. Be carefully and don't fed with GMOs for your health. It is impossible to distinguish between natural and GMO products. That's why, try to plant your own crops.
Nowadays, there are GMO
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products
everywhere. The GMOs are too
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dangerous
for our
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health and
they cause cancer. The GMO means Genetic Modified Organisms. Viruses,
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plant
,
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animal
and human cells can belong to GMO.

Based to
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endocrinologist-nutritionist-Salim
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Asadov
's words: The GMO
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products
can affect chronic effects like allergic, toxic and cancer. In order to can distinguish,
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have to
be special label on the GMO
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products
, feeds and seeds. It is not healthy to
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get
eggs, milk and meat form
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animals
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fed
GMOs.
Also
, this has
been proven
in the laboratory. The reason for this, these
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products
can create antibiotic-resistant bacteria.

After humans
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fed
with GMOs, these
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bacterias
gradually
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fed
massive,
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these ingredient
are
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soya
, popcorn
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and etc
. Based on
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animal
experiments,
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some
damages have
been detected
.
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, gastric ulcer have
been detected
in the mouse of
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feded
with genetic modified tomato. In
additionally
, dysfunction of liver and pancreas have
been detected
in the mouse of
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feded
with GMOs. Such
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products
of causing damage in the
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animals
, imagine how damages cause in the human.

What is the purpose of planting these crops? Day by day the humans' count increases that's why the specialists want to increase the productivity of
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plants
. In order to increase the tolerance of
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plant
to environment and ensure the abundance of
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products
, such crops
are prepared
. Due to protest, GMOs haven't already been
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used
in Europe since 1990. Even, these
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products
have
been banned
entering to our country.

Be
carefully
and don't
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fed
with GMOs for your health. It is impossible to distinguish between natural and GMO
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products
. That's why, try to
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plant
your
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own
crops.
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IELTS essay New food products like GMO (genetically modified organism) threats food security. What is the positive and negative affect of GMO added products?

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