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Neighbors help in our life scene.

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As I probably understand you are asking me that how people help their neighbors? It is very interesting question for me. All of us has known that people live in a flat or in an appartment they becomes a neighbors actually. During the life people needs to other people help such as neighbors in different situations. Human life consist of alot of ups and downs and these sircumstances people help each other. For instance in our country neighbors help each other to theirs happy days, wedding day etc.
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each other to theirs happy days, wedding day etc.
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IELTS essay Neighbors help in our life scene.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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