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The limit of freedom is always a popular topic of discussion in the current world. Freedom of speech is necessary or it should be within some imaginary boundaries is always a debatable argument. This essay will discuss about the necessity of the freedom of speech in the modern free society. The primary reason to have an opportunity to express the feelings of a citizen is important, since that will give him a sense of self existence. For example, if a common man have to follow the orders of powerful people without raising any questions, his life will be robotic. Even though he know that it is wrong, the fear of oppression will make him follow the crowd. This will eventually turns out to be another version of slavery where he just do whatever the masters say. Indeed, it will make the population into accepting anything the leaders blabber and they will lose their conscience and may end up in any extreme situations like war or terrorism. In a modern democratic free society, the people should be able to express their thoughts. They should have the ability to analyze and take informed decisions. For example, if the citizens do not express their thoughts and choose the right leader, it may lead to catastrophic disasters. History have lots of examples for such situations. Everyone knows how Adolf Hitler's Germany started the second world war. That society did not have the freedom of speech and everyone was under the military observation. Whoever raised their voice was oppressed and it eventually lead to a dictatorship from democracy. This is the reason why the freedom of speech is becoming extremely important in a society. Freedom of speech should always be utilized effectively. It does not means the freedom to abuse or hurt another person. It should be always healthy discussions where the ideas should compete so that everyone can understand which ideology is better for the society. It is an important thing that needs to be exercised carefully. Even though there are situations when few people consider it as freedom to say anything, it is always beneficial for a community to have this freedom compared to which we are restricted completely.
The limit of
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freedom
is always a popular topic of discussion in the
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current
world.
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Freedom
of
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speech
is necessary or it should be within
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some
imaginary boundaries is always a debatable argument. This essay will
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discuss about the
necessity of the
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freedom
of
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speech
in the modern free society.

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important
, since that will give him a sense of self existence.
For example
, if a common
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man
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have to
follow the orders of powerful
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people
without raising any questions, his life will be robotic.
Even though
he
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know
that it is
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wrong
, the fear of oppression will
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make
him follow the crowd. This will
eventually
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turns
out to be another version of slavery where he
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just
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do
whatever the masters say.
Indeed
, it will
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make
the population into accepting anything the leaders
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blabber and
they will lose their conscience and may
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end
up in any extreme situations like war or terrorism.

In a modern democratic free society, the
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people
should be able to express their thoughts. They should have the ability to analyze and take informed decisions.
For example
, if the citizens do not express their thoughts and choose the right leader, it may lead to catastrophic disasters. History have lots of examples for such situations. Everyone knows how Adolf Hitler's Germany
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started
the second world war. That society did not have the
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freedom
of
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speech
and everyone was under the military observation. Whoever raised their voice
was oppressed
and it
eventually
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lead
to a dictatorship from democracy. This is the reason why the
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freedom
of
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speech
is becoming
extremely
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important
in a society.

Freedom of
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speech
should always
be utilized
effectively
. It does not
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means
the
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freedom
to abuse or hurt another person. It should be always healthy discussions where the
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ideas
should compete
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so
that everyone can understand which ideology is better for the society.
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It
is an
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important
thing that needs to
be exercised
carefully
.
Even though
there are situations when few
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people
consider it as
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freedom
to say anything, it is always beneficial for a community to have this
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freedom
compared to which we
are restricted
completely.
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IELTS essay necessity of freedom of speech

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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