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What level do u want to study

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Realizing the importance of English in life, my family sent me to learn English since I was 4 years old. With the acquisition of a new language from a very young age, English has become my second language. During my high school years, I participated in many English speaking projects large and small in front of many people. After all that I have achieved through English and a high school graduation exam score of 9 points, I am confident that I deserve to study.
Realizing the importance of English in life, my family
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me to learn English since I was 4 years
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. With the acquisition of a new language from a
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young age, English has become my second language. During my high school years, I participated in
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many
Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?
English speaking
projects large and
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small
in front of
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many
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After all
that I have achieved through English and a high school graduation exam score of 9 points, I am confident that I deserve to study.
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IELTS essay What level do u want to study

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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