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Natural talent or teaching VPkOO
Many people claim that talent is something some people are born with. Although, others claim that a child can always learn to become famous, for instance musician or sport person. These days education systems believes that children should learn based on their skills especially when it comes to art, music or sports. There are plenty of communities who continue teaching on what youth are interested or skilled since childhood such as Sachin Tendulkar, the famous cricketer who had always this sports talent
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musician or sport person. These days education systems believes that children should learn based on their
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of communities who continue teaching on what youth
are interested
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Sachin
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IELTS essay Natural talent or teaching

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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