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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes?

Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? K3bNR

Many people don't feel safe either at home or when they are out because of the many causes likewise when they were outside that they have fear of accident fear of stealing they could be triggered by sly people any type of attack Nowadays we are in pandemic situation where we don't feel safe outside at home because of viruses like corona and omicron. Spreading very quickly and harming our body in a day government is also taking many initiatives to control that's why they are wanting us to be at home and don't step out from house unnecessarily and while people were at home they have a fear of losing opportunity they have fear that if they stay at home that will harm their health and in business or work they will not be able to excel and can't grasp opportunity to meet and have to do work with limited people they will be in the box and slowly they will kill their time.

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