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Name a person who has influenced you and explain why that influence was important. Include details and examples to support your explanation. v.1

Name a person who has influenced you and explain why that influence was important. Include details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1
Wearing a uniform at some workplaces is a compulsory these days and it is becoming more popular. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of wearing homogeneous clothes on the job. There is a plethora of benefits of wearing uniform. First of all, when employees wear uniforms they feel discipline, which is the most imperative role in any company 's growth. After that, if an organisation has an inflexible clothing policy, then it is a good walking advertisement. For instance, employees finish their job, went out, everyone can see the logo of the company and the name of the company, which is a free advertisement. Then, having a uniform, can be time saving. For example, in the morning, there will no confusion of 'what to wear'. Furthermore, an orderly clothing creates team unity, workers act as a team and working as a team to produce more products. Last but not the least, it can be budget friendly, employees do not need to spent money on shopping clothes for work. The drawbacks are that it can be boring, normally folks do not like to wear the same clothes every day. Because change is a law of nature. Also, a regular clothing can effected on person's self expression and the individual. Thus, people have their own choices. To conclude, I would like to say that a dress code is very essential these days in the workplace. There are more advantages than disadvantages of systematic clothes in the management. In the future, more companies will adopt this policy.
Wearing a
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uniform
at
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some
workplaces is a compulsory these days and it is becoming more popular. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of wearing homogeneous
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clothes
on the job.

There is a plethora of benefits of wearing
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uniform
.
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First of all
, when employees wear
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uniforms
they feel discipline, which is the most imperative role in any
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company
's growth. After that, if an
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organisation
has an inflexible clothing policy, then it is a
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good
walking advertisement.
For instance
, employees finish their job, went out, everyone can
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see
the logo of the
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company
and the name of the
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company
, which is a free advertisement. Then, having a
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uniform
, can be time saving.
For example
, in the morning, there will no confusion of 'what to wear'.

Furthermore
, an orderly clothing creates team unity, workers act as a team and working as a team to produce more products. Last
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but
not the least, it can be budget friendly, employees do not need to spent money on shopping
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clothes
for work.

The drawbacks are that it can be boring,
normally
folks do not like to wear the same
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clothes
every day.
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Because
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change
is a law of nature.
Also
, a regular clothing can effected on person's
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self expression
and the individual.
Thus
,
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people
have their
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own
choices.

To conclude
, I would like to say that a dress code is
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very
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essential
these days in the workplace. There are more advantages than disadvantages of systematic
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clothes
in the management. In the future, more
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companies
will adopt this policy.
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IELTS essay Name a person who has influenced you and explain why that influence was important. Include details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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