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n today’s modern life where new technologies are done for people’s needs, social media has become one of the most famous method of chat. This way is useful for people. In these paragraphs below I am going to show useful ways of NET.

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Essay. In today’s modern life where new technologies are done for people’s needs, social media has become one of the most famous method of chat. This way is useful for people. In these paragraphs below I am going to show useful ways of NET. First, internet is comfortable for people especially workers and juniors. Because they have not got free time for meeting with all people. So they are solve some problems by Ethernet. In the result of this motion, they are kept their time for free works. And they are spent time for learning. Second, WI-FI is convenient for reading books. Such disabled people consequently they cannot go out for shopping. On the contrary they can download many data from NET. On the other hand, all people have not got enough money for buy something. And these kind of nations can use the internet. In the result of this motion mankind are kept their money. Owing to they are spend their money for useful things. On the other hand, NET is very bad method of communication. Because all gratiduates have got their mobile phone. But all inhabitants are not use cell phone for the good way. The number of students are utilize the phone by bad ways. Even, they are shouting their parents for earning a mobile phone. Among the most important reason, pupils are not read books and learn any kind of new discoveries. Consequently their future is not good. To sum up above, the NET has become one of the most popular method of chat. Internet is effect to juniors from negative ways. Therefore parents are not give a mobile phone for their children.
Essay.

In
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today
’s modern life where new technologies
are done
for
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people’s
needs, social media has become one of the most
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famous
method of chat. This
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way
is useful for
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people
. In these paragraphs below I am going to
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show
useful
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ways
of NET.

First
, internet is comfortable for
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people
especially
workers and juniors.
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Because
they have not
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got
free time for meeting with all
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people
.
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So
they are
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solve
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some
problems by Ethernet. In the result of this motion, they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
their time for free works. And they
are spent
time for learning.

Second, WI-FI is convenient for reading books. Such disabled
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people
consequently
they cannot go out for shopping.
On the contrary
they can download
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many
data from NET.
On the other hand
, all
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people
have not
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got
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enough
money for
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buy
something. And
Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?
these kind
of nations can
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use
the internet. In the result of this motion mankind are
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kept
their money. Owing to they are
Consider using a past participle here: "spent".
spend
their money for useful things.

On the other hand
, NET is
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very
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bad
method of communication.
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Because
all
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gratiduates
have
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got
their mobile
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phone
.
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But
all inhabitants are not
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use
cell
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phone
for the
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good
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way
. The number of students
Did you mean "is"?
are
Consider using a past participle here: "utilized".
utilize
the
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phone
by
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bad
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ways
. Even, they are shouting their parents for earning a mobile
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phone
. Among the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
reason, pupils are not read books and learn any kind of new discoveries.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Consequently
their future is not
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good
.

To sum up above, the NET has become one of the most popular method of chat. Internet is effect to juniors from
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negative
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
parents are not give a mobile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phone
for their children.
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IELTS essay n today’s modern life where new technologies are done for people’s needs, social media has become one of the most famous method of chat. This way is useful for people. In these paragraphs below I am going to show useful ways of NET.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
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