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First and formost cause of believing that, the income generated should be utilised instantly is that an individual should relish his present fully which implies that, it can be only possible by the money which he earns. To instantiate, a survey conducted by University of Washington, those who consume all of their salaries, in fulfilling their basic amenities and leisure activities, feel more contended and relaxed in comparison to those who save hefty sum of money to secure their future. Human life is a beautiful creation of Almighty which should be lived happily and with enthusiasm.

First and formost cause of believing that, the income generated should be utilised instantly is that an individual should relish his present fully which implies that, it can be only possible by the money which he earns. To instantiate, a survey conducted by University of Washington, those who consume all of their salaries, in fulfilling their basic amenities and leisure activities, feel more contended and relaxed in comparison to those who save hefty sum of money to secure their future. Human life is a beautiful creation of Almighty which should be lived happily and with enthusiasm. BJD6j

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formost
 cause of believing that, the income generated should be Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
instantly


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIs
is
 that an individual should relish his present fully
 which implies that, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 possible

by the money which he earns. To instantiate, a survey conducted by University of Washington,

those who consume all of their salaries, in fulfilling their basic amenities and leisure activities,

feel more contended and relaxed in comparison
 to those who save hefty sum of money

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 secure their future. Human life is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 creation of Almighty which should be Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphlived.lived!lived?lived:lived,lived;
lived


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHappily
happily
 and with enthusiasm. 