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The given scheme explains the process of instant noodles production. Moreover it reveals how this product appears on super market shelves. In general, there are eight stages of manufacturing before the final product is being delivered to the store. The first operation consists of putting flour into storage soils. Then the flour is mixed with some other ingredients into dough in a special machine. The substance is further stretched into sheets with a cut into thin strips during the fourth stage. The following operation involves the strips too. At this moment the noodles are formed into discs. After that the round-shaped figures are cooked in oil and dried. The seventh stage consists of placing the product into cups and adding some vegetables and spices to it. The final part of production process is mainly about the packaging. T this moment freshly painted labels are added to the cups which are sealed after that. As soon as this product (instant noodles) is ready to leave the factory, it is shipped to a shopping facility. Overall, it takes a considerably long time for a product to get to a super market
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explains
the process of instant noodles production.
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Moreover
it reveals how this
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product
appears on super market shelves.
In general
, there are eight stages of manufacturing
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before
the final
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product
is
being delivered
to the store.

The
first
operation consists of putting flour into storage soils. Then the flour
is mixed
with
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some
other ingredients into dough in a special machine. The substance is
further
stretched into sheets with a
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cut
into thin strips during the fourth stage. The following operation involves the strips too. At this moment the noodles
are formed
into discs. After that the round-shaped figures
are cooked
in oil and dried. The seventh stage consists of placing the
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product
into cups and adding
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some
vegetables and spices to it. The final part of production process is
mainly
about the packaging. T this moment
freshly
painted labels are
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added
to the cups which
are sealed
after that. As
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soon
as this
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product
(instant noodles) is ready to
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leave
the factory, it
is shipped
to a shopping facility.

Overall
, it takes a
considerably
long time for a
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product
to
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get
to a super market

IELTS essay Ffc gytrefhec rhvthc rdc tuix ois1itf yhvtdc ygcrc

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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