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Some people predict that humans' life will be much better in the future due to the advancements in every aspect of life. However, others pessimistically think that future life will be worse than we imagine. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some people predict that humans' life will be much better in the future due to the advancements in every aspect of life. However, others pessimistically think that future life will be worse than we imagine. NMNDW
In this day and age, people have different views about the cultivation methods of life in the future. While there are good arguments in favour of the worse life in the future, I personally believe that the life of humans will be sharpened in the future owing to the developments of many factors. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that the future life will not cultivated. Firstly, the covid-19 pandemic has an adverse impact on daily life and reduces the standard of development in their country. Strong evidence shows that the statistics of finance and economics are dramatically decrease and it also affects on the quality of humans's life such bussiness, heath, education and so on. Secondly, there are many negative factors that the awareness of people can not be enough improved and controlled by the security of nation. In this way, many people still take out the garbage illegally and we do not have enough factory to recycle due to 95% the release of waste every day. This issue may be lead on the verse of polluted environment and have a negative on the advancements of life in the future. On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I strongly believe that the life of human still can be sharpened in the future. The main reason for this view is that the revolution of digital industry can find the way to assist people to motivate many factors such as economics, society and so on. Obviously, this application can use more technology in order to control the awareness of people such as machine learning, computer vision. Another reason for this opinion is that government should enact laws to punish who have low levels of social awareness and cooperate with many developed countries. On good example is that people who do some illegal activites will be punished and and the cooperation with developed countries creates a condition to enhance many areas such as economics, bussiness, technology, science, society and so on. In conclusion. while there are convincing arguments both for and against the less expectation of life development in the future, but it seems to me that the life of human will be enhanced and developed many areas by the brilliant methods.
In this day and age,
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different
views about the cultivation methods of
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life
in the
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future
. While there are
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good
arguments in
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favour
of the worse
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life
in the
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future
, I
personally
believe that the
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life
of humans will
be sharpened
in the
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future
owing to the developments of
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many
factors.

On the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could
be argued
that the
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future
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life
will not
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cultivated
.
Firstly
, the
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covid-19
pandemic has an adverse impact on daily
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life
and
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reduces
the standard of development in their country. Strong evidence
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shows
that the statistics of finance and economics are
dramatically
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decrease
and it
also
affects on the quality of
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humans's
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life
such
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bussiness
, heath, education and
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so
on.
Secondly
, there are
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many
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negative
factors that the awareness of
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people
can not be
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enough
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improved
and controlled by the security of nation. In this way,
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many
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people
still
take out the garbage
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illegally and
we do not have
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enough
factory to recycle due to 95% the release of waste every day. This issue may be lead on the verse of polluted environment and have a
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negative
on the advancements of
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life
in the future.

On the other hand
, despite the above arguments, I
strongly
believe that the
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life
of human
still
can
be sharpened
in the
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future
. The main reason for this view is that the revolution of digital industry can find the way to assist
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people
to motivate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors such as economics, society and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on.
Obviously
, this application can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
more technology in order to control the awareness of
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people
such as machine learning, computer vision. Another reason for this opinion is that
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government
should enact laws to punish who have low levels of social awareness and cooperate with
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many
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developed countries
. On
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good
example is that
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people
who do
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some
illegal
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activites
will
be punished
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and and
the cooperation with
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developed countries
creates a condition to enhance
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many
areas such as economics,
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bussiness
, technology, science, society and
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so
on.

In conclusion
.
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while
there are convincing arguments both for and against the less expectation of
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life
development in the
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future
,
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but
it seems to me that the
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life
of human will
be enhanced
and developed
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many
areas by the brilliant methods.
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IELTS essay Some people predict that humans' life will be much better in the future due to the advancements in every aspect of life. However, others pessimistically think that future life will be worse than we imagine.

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379 words
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