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My uzbek restaurant in America.

My uzbek restaurant in America. 969G7
Nowadays many countries have a lot of restaurants. Because restaurants are culture of countries. Because of this I have my private restaurant in America. But my restaurant has uzbek meals and people like restaurant. My restaurant is located in the heart of America. Restaurant's name is "Wow". Because a lot of people come restaurant and say wow. When you fly to America, you should come my restaurant. I opened my restaurant in "1993" with my friend. I have worked in this restaurant since 1993. By the way my friend went to Uzbekistan 3 years ago. But we tell in phone every day.
Nowadays
many
countries have
a lot of
restaurants
.
Because
restaurants
are culture of countries.
Because
of this I have my private
restaurant
in America.
But
my
restaurant
has
uzbek
meals and
people
like
restaurant
. My
restaurant
is located
in the heart of America. Restaurant's name is
"
Wow
"
.
Because
a lot of
people
come
restaurant
and say wow. When you
fly
to America, you should
come
my
restaurant
. I opened my
restaurant
in
"
1993
"
with my friend. I have worked in this
restaurant
since 1993. By the way my friend went to Uzbekistan 3 years ago.
But
we
tell
in phone every day.
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IELTS essay My uzbek restaurant in America.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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