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my understandings of commercial agents under Vietnamese Law.

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In the market economy, to achieve the ultimate goal is profit, traders often use flexible ways of business methods. In which, commericial agents have begun to appear and gradually affirm their role in economic development. Commericial agents in our country are growing, increasing rapidly in both quantity and quality. Therefore, commercial agents are regulated by Vietnamese laws in a very specific and detailed way. These provisions of the law have a great role in trading in Vietnam as well as promoting a market economy. In my essay, I will show my understandings of commercial agents under Vietnamese Law.
In the market economy, to achieve the ultimate goal is profit, traders
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flexible ways of business methods. In which,
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commericial
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agents
have begun to appear and
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affirm their role in economic development.
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Commericial
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agents
in our country are growing, increasing
rapidly
in both quantity and quality.
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agents
are regulated
by Vietnamese laws in a
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specific and detailed way. These provisions of the law have a great role in trading in Vietnam
as well
as promoting a market economy. In my essay, I will
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show
my understandings of commercial
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agents
under Vietnamese Law.
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IELTS essay my understandings of commercial agents under Vietnamese Law.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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