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if you have children, what would you do differently from your parents while brining them up.

if you have children, what would you do differently from your parents while brining them up. N8GXy
parenting can be a challenging responsibility. we can not undermine the struggle and hard work of our parents who bought us up. I am thankful to my parents for their unconditional love and support care, though I would like to change something for my kids, and that is making them more confident to meet the challenges of the changing world. my parents want to choose a single field of study. while i think it is important for kids to be muilt-skille. today's world has more opportunities for people who are skillful in more than one filed.
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parenting
can be a challenging responsibility.
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we
can not undermine the struggle and
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hard
work of our parents who
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bought
us up. I am thankful to my parents for their unconditional
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love
and support care, though I would like to
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change
something for my kids, and
that is
making them more confident to
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meet
the challenges of the changing world.
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my
parents want to choose a single field of study.
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while
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
it is
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important
for kids to be
Possible spelling mistake found.
muilt-skille
.
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today
's world has more opportunities for
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people
who are skillful in more than one filed.

IELTS essay if you have children, what would you do differently from your parents while brining them up.

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96 words
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