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I LIVE IN NAWANSHAHAR. NAWANSHAHR IS SMALL CITY. MY HOUSE IN NAWANSHAHR. MY HOUSE IS NOT A BIG. MY HOUSE IN 7 ROOM. FRIST ROOM IS MY AND SECOND ROOM MY SISTER AND THREE ROOM IS MY PERSENT. MY HOME IN LIVING ROOM. LIVING IS NOT A BIG BUT MY FAMILY SPEND THE TIME IN LIVING ROOM. NEXT ROOM IS DRWING ROOM, DRWING ROOM IS NOT BIG BUT SOME TME GEAST COE IN MY HOUSE. GEAST SPEAND THE TIME IN LIVING ROOM. GEASTY VEY HAPPY SIT IN LIVING ROOM. MY HOME IN ONE KITCHE. MY MOM DAIY READY THE FOOD AND TWO REASTROOM AND JOINT OF THE ROOM.
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IELTS essay my topic is my home IS BIG AND SMALL

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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