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In most of the countries number of plants and animal species are declining What is causing this What can we do to change the situation

In most of the countries number of plants and animal species are declining What is causing this What can we do to change the situation mbK1r
Today, in most of the nations there are numerus reasons of plants and animals are falling each year. This essay would shed lights on the valid reasons and do analysis to change the situation in the forthcoming paragraphs. To comments with, Global Warming plays a huge role in plants and creatures reducing every 12 months. However, humans are constructing buildings even in forest area so they are taking over there homes in nature. Some of the animals are getting hunted by cruelly people and they also cutting the trees for creating furniture. Nevertheless, if there were no trees left in jungle area than there will be no enough rain and it will affect both plants and animals. Moving further, industries play a very crucial role in terms of polluting environment as every year, they throw tons of wastage such as raw material, chemicals and plastic. It creates immense, water pollution and this water flows to rivers, lakes and ocean. In fact, most plants and animals are dependent on river water and it will harm there body and they will slowly die. In order to tackle such situations, we can urge to citizens to not to throw waste in water as it is prime need of living beings. Secondly, we can also request to government to pass few strict laws regarding no-construction zone in forest area along with, increase fines for unnecessary cutting trees and killing animals. Few animals species can be relocated to a safer place for there better lifestyle. There are few species of plants which can be rarely grew in this mondernized cities so we can transfer it to a good environment. To cap it all, both plants and animals are equally important as human beings so we should give them a proper space and good environment.
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, in most of the nations there are
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reasons of
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plants
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animals
are falling each year. This essay would shed lights on the valid reasons and do analysis to
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change
the situation in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To comments with, Global Warming plays a huge role in
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plants
and creatures reducing every 12 months.
However
, humans are constructing buildings even in forest area
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so
they are taking over there homes in nature.
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Some of the
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animals
are getting hunted by
cruelly
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people and
they
also
cutting the trees for creating furniture.
Nevertheless
, if there were no trees
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left
in jungle area than there will be no
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enough
rain and it will affect both
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plants
and
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animals
. Moving
further
, industries play a
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very
crucial role in terms of polluting environment as every year, they throw tons of wastage such as raw material, chemicals and plastic. It creates immense,
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water
pollution and this
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water
flows to rivers, lakes and ocean. In fact, most
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plants
and
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animals
are dependent on river
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water
and it will harm there
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body and
they will
slowly
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die
.

In order to tackle such situations, we can urge to citizens
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to not to
throw waste in
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water
as it is prime need of living beings.
Secondly
, we can
also
request to
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government
to pass few strict laws regarding no-construction zone in forest area along with, increase fines for unnecessary cutting trees and killing
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animals
. Few
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animals
species can
be relocated
to a safer place for there better lifestyle. There are few species of
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plants
which can be rarely
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grew
in this
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mondernized
cities
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so
we can transfer it to a
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good
environment.

To cap it all, both
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plants
and
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animals
are
equally
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important
as human beings
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so
we should give them a proper space and
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good
environment.
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IELTS essay In most of the countries number of plants and animal species are declining What is causing this What can we do to change the situation

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  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
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