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A lot of people spend a major part of the dalf life at work. So job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness.

A lot of people spend a major part of the dalf life at work. So job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness. gGJ5D
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IELTS essay A lot of people spend a major part of the dalf life at work. So job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
185 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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