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the life cycle of a butterfly

the life cycle of a butterfly 75k15

There are four stages in evolution of butterfly such as egg, larva, pupa and adult butterfly. First of all, adult female butterfly lays eggs on the leaves of the plant. After that, these eggs hatch and turn into larva that we call caterpillar. Caterpilla feeds on leaves to grow bigger and change its skin several times. When caterpilla stops eating, they will start to produce a productive layer covers itself and makes a pupa. Caterpilla undergoes complete metamorphosis to emerge as a butterfly. After about 15 days, the butterfly comes out of the pupa but it is still weak, so it have to take a rest until it ready to fly. Subsequently, adult butterfly lays the eggs again and the life cycle begin again.

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