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My topic is my favourite activities

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My favourite activities is playing cricket. Cricket is very good game and every game but I choose this game. It is not effect my body. I play daily. Its part of bat, boll and every part. This game for good my body. I play morning time when I am free. Cricket with do not pain the body. One player and opposite player throw the ball and second player cough to ball. I play game only two hour. Two hour is very important in my life. Two hour I spend time in ground. Ground is very big. It is in Nawanshahr.
My
favourite
activities is playing cricket. Cricket is
very
good
game and every game
but
I choose this game. It is not
effect
my body. I play daily. Its part of bat, boll and every part. This game for
good
my body. I play morning time when I am free. Cricket with do not pain the body. One player and opposite player throw the ball and second player cough to ball. I play game
only
two
hour
. Two
hour
is
very
important
in my life. Two
hour
I spend time in ground. Ground is
very
big
. It is in
Nawanshahr
.
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IELTS essay My topic is my favourite activities

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  American English
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100 words
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