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My topic is my favourite activities

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My favourite activities is playing cricket. Cricket is very good game and every game but I choose this game. It is not effect my body. I play daily. Its part of bat, boll and every part. This game for good my body. I play morning time when I am free. Cricket with do not pain the body. One player and opposite player throw the ball and second player cough to ball. I play game only two hour. Two hour is very important in my life. Two hour I spend time in ground. Ground is very big. It is in Nawanshahr.
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activities is playing cricket. Cricket is
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game and every game
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I choose this game. It is not
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my body. I play daily. Its part of bat, boll and every part. This game for
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good
my body. I play morning time when I am free. Cricket with do not pain the body. One player and opposite player throw the ball and second player cough to ball. I play game
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two
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in my life. Two
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I spend time in ground. Ground is
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IELTS essay My topic is my favourite activities

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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