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tell about your most difficult experience you have ever had

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Changing careers was the most difficult choice I have ever made in my life. I was a programmer at FPT software for three years before I decided to quit that job to pursue a career in teaching. The salary was good, but I didn’t like this job. I wanted to quit and become a lecturer. I did not have any experience or degree in teaching. So, after contemplating the switch for several weeks, I finally resigned. After quitting this job, I did some courses in teaching and then applied for a new job at university. Eventually, I did find a good job as a lecturer. Today, I have somewhat established myself as a professional lecturer. In conclusion, it was a difficult experience but it was really true for me. My new job does not pay as much as my previous job, but I am happy
Changing careers was the most difficult choice I have ever made in my life. I was a programmer at FPT software for three years
before
I decided to quit that
job
to pursue a career in teaching. The salary was
good
,
but
I didn’t like this
job
. I wanted to quit and become a lecturer. I did not have any experience or degree in teaching.
So
, after contemplating the switch for several weeks, I
finally
resigned. After quitting this
job
, I did
some
courses in teaching and then applied for a new
job
at university.
Eventually
, I did find a
good
job
as a lecturer.
Today
, I have somewhat established myself as a professional lecturer.
In conclusion
, it was a difficult experience
but
it was
really
true for me. My new
job
does not pay as much as my previous
job
,
but
I am
happy
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IELTS essay tell about your most difficult experience you have ever had

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