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My story started on a sunny day, me and my companion dog meat (name of the dog). We were watching cloud on a field. I was pointing out to dog meat strange looking cloud that look like a brain, a single woman, lover kissing each other. And then suddenly the weather turns bad the beautiful sky a moment ago was cover by dark rainy cloud. While we are running home a lightning strikes the tree behind us and when we got home another lightning strike where we were minute ago. Save to say we were very happy that we are lucky to dodge two lightning strike in a row.

My story started on a sunny day, me and my companion dog meat (name of the dog). We were watching cloud on a field. I was pointing out to dog meat strange looking cloud that look like a brain, a single woman, lover kissing each other. And then suddenly the weather turns bad the beautiful sky a moment ago was cover by dark rainy cloud. While we are running home a lightning strikes the tree behind us and when we got home another lightning strike where we were minute ago. Save to say we were very happy that we are lucky to dodge two lightning strike in a row. BLY0a

My story This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 on a sunny day, me and my companion dog meat (name of the dog). We were watching cloud on a field. I was pointing out to dog meat strange looking cloud that look like a brain, a single woman, lover kissing each other. And then suddenly
 the weather turns This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 sky a moment ago was cover by dark rainy cloud. While we are running home a lightning strikes the tree behind us and when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 home another lightning strike where we were minute ago. Save to say we were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy that we are lucky to dodge two lightning Possible agreement error. The noun 'strike' seems to be countable, so consider using: "strikes".strikes
strike
 in a row. 