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Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate. BMxL5
The given bar char presents the details about male and female employment percentage in six different countries in 1995 and 2005. Overall, both male and female rates rose in 1995 and 2005 However, the figures for male employments were significantly higher than the female employments in both years. Iceland has highest figure for male employments while the Switzerland were achieved highest rate for female employment in 2005. In 1995, the number of male employments has highest rate in Iceland, that was at seven in ten. as well as, it increased by just over 10% in 2005. There was a considerably increase in male employment from 1995 to 2005. However it remained the same in UK, New Zealand and USA in 2005, that were at just around 70%. By 2005, Switzerland has highest female employment rate, which is increase by just over 10% from 1995. Australia and New Zealand accounted lowest rate in 2005, that were at over 20%. In contrast, female employments rates have fluctuated in these two years.
The
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given
bar char presents the
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details
about male and
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female
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employment
percentage in six
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different
countries in 1995 and 2005.

Overall
, both male and
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female
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rates
rose in 1995 and 2005
However
, the figures for male
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employments
were
significantly
higher than the
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female
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employments
in both years. Iceland has
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highest
figure for male
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employments
while the Switzerland
were achieved
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highest
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rate
for
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female
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employment
in 2005.

In 1995, the number of male
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employments
has
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highest
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rate
in Iceland, that was at seven in ten.
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as
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just
over 10% in 2005. There was a
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considerably increase
in male
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employment
from 1995 to 2005.
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However
it remained the same in UK, New Zealand and USA in 2005, that were at
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just
around 70%.

By 2005, Switzerland has
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highest
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female
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employment
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rate
, which is increase by
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just
over 10% from 1995. Australia and New Zealand accounted
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lowest
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rate
in 2005, that were at over 20%.
In contrast
,
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female
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employments
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rates
have fluctuated in these two years.
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IELTS essay Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
169 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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