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My plans for the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

My plans for the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? K2rN

My name is Svetlana. I am a student. I study in Donetsk. I am 19 years old. I am a student of the third year of study. I have a lot of plans for future. And my first dream is to graduate from the university and start working as an economist. My future profession is my own choice. I study with pleasure. I would like to earn my own money and become more independent. Nowadays everyone dreams about a successful career. I also want to become a very good economist. I like to communicate with people, so I will be happy to organize and lead a project in the sphere of economics. I am also fond of foreign languages, English and German. I plan to visit Germany and the USA in order to practice my language skills and learn something new about the customs and traditions of these countries. I want to see the famous Statue of Liberty and other places of historical interest with my own eyes. When I succeed in my career, I plan to create a family and have children. My parents have three children. I think we are a united and friendly family. Each evening we gather together in our kitchen and discuss our plans for the next day. I also would like to have such family traditions that will unite my family. If I realize all my plans, I will become happy. And then, perhaps, I will plan something new for future.

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 choice. I study with pleasure. I would like to earn my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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 money and become more independent.

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I
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I
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plan
 to visit Germany and the USA in order to practice my language This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
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 and learn something new about the customs and traditions of these countries. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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family
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family
. Each evening we gather together in our kitchen and discuss our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
 for the next
 day. I also
 would like to have such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 traditions that will unite my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
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. If I realize all my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plans
, I will become happy. And then, perhaps, I will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
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