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My people think that tourism is important while other argue that it is not important. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

My people think that tourism is important while other argue that it is not important. YdldK

there are several reasons why tourism is important. The first and foremost reason is that tourism increases counties economic. In other words, many tourist travels through aviation for it helps to rises country revenue. Not only increase economic, but also improve the way living style. However, tourist aids to maintain old building. By this I mean they vist historical monument and they have to pay for entry tickets. As a result, generate enough money for refurbishment or developing old buildings.

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 country revenue. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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, tourist aids to maintain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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