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My paragraph stands for Myself

My paragraph stands for Myself GMg8B
my name is shabab. I'm 19 years old. Recently my University admission delay 2 month. so i will get some free time for study. my name is shabab. I'm 19 years old. Recently my University admission delay 2 month. so i will get some free time for study. my name is shabab. I'm 19 years old. Recently my University admission delay 2 month. so i will get some free time for study. my name is shabab. I'm 19 years old. Recently my University admission delay 2 month. so i will get some free time for study. my name is shabab. I'm 19 years old. Recently my University admission delay 2 month. so i will get some free time for study. my name is shabab. I'm 19 years old. Recently my University admission delay 2 month. so i will get some free time for study.
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shabab
. I'm 19 years
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my
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shabab
. I'm 19 years
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old
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Recently
my
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University
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admission
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delay
2
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month
.
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so
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will
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get
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some
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free
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time
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study
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my
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name
is
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shabab
. I'm 19 years
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old
.
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Recently
my
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University
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admission
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delay
2
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month
.
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so
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i
will
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get
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some
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free
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time
for
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study
.
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my
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name
is
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shabab
. I'm 19 years
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old
.
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Recently
my
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University
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admission
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delay
2
Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".
month
.
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so
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i
will
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get
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some
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free
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time
for
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study
.
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my
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name
is
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shabab
. I'm 19 years
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old
.
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Recently
my
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University
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admission
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delay
2
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month
.
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so
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i
will
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get
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some
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free
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time
for
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study
.
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my
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name
is
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shabab
. I'm 19 years
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old
.
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Recently
my
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University
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admission
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delay
2
Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".
month
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
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some
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free
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time
for
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study
.
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IELTS essay My paragraph stands for Myself

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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