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My one year in iQanat high school of Burabay

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When I entered to IQHSB, I had been in worry with my think, about “what will happen next? ”. But I got that it is big opportunity for my future and I began to set big goals. When I did not come this school I heard a lot about IQHSB and I expected a big opportunity in this school. I thought, there will be natural and national atmosphere in IQHSB and when I came here, I really fall it. So, I studied here one academic year and in this year I learned a lot of skills. They are critical thinking, do conversation, time management etc. Also I learned play guitar, dombra, piano. But I think that my English skill is improved than other my skills. Because at the begin academic year, I had been a beginner in English language and now I have middle level. However I am not going to stop, because I need more practice. So, I am going to study in my summer holidays and improve my English skills.
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academic year, I had been a beginner in English language and
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I have middle level.
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I am not going to
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, I am going to study in my summer holidays and
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IELTS essay My one year in iQanat high school of Burabay

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
172 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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